• Member Since 13th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 28th, 2016

Fenrir928


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Woo-hoo! It's here!

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I hope that the story is worth your excitement. Plan on trying a lot of new things.

Sweet a sequel. This should be awesome

Well... Somepony has a Cye arm rammed up her ass.

Also, So excited that this sequel is a thing! :D

How did I only just now found out about this? I will go stand here in this corner, feeling really stupid and ashamed right now. :facehoof:

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Well I'm glad that you did, and hopefully liked it.:twilightsheepish:

I have the next chapter done, just going through edits right now.

4528807 I did like it. And :yay: for the next chapter. Hope it comes out soon.

nice chapter. Just one small thing I noticed:

Her wins had folded against her sides,

Celestia for the wins.:trollestia:

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Thank you for telling me, and that's fixed.

4579622 No problem, and keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

Nice chapter, albeit a bit short. Eagerly waiting for more. :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, I knew it was a bit short. But, it would have been too long if I went to the next section. Gonna try and stop screwing about and actually start writing again, so hopefully you won't have so long to wait between chapters this time.

5324896 The wait wasn't that bad compared to what I am putting my own readers through... Although, to be fair. The blame goes mostly to my editor this time. Still, after five months without a update people do tend to get a bit restless. :twilightsheepish: Still. They do get over 42k WHEN things finally get published. So those three months aren't that bad. After all. Quality over quantity, wouldn't you agree?

Twilight is a battle hardened soldier, i'm okay with this....

Awesome, new chapter.

*After reading.*

What, that's all. :raritycry: I want more.

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I'm really, really sorry. Life kinda hit like a truck these last few months. Things are getting back in order though, I hope.

Hmm...had trouble placing what Dr. Ghalemon's accent resembled. If someone wanted to raze that old lab, collapsing it with heavy explosives underground would make a helluva a lot more sense than orbital bombardment - get all useful material out of it, then seal it up like a tomb.

Damn... this looks like it has died. I was enjoying this series and I come to the sequel to see only 6 chapters last one being posted about 4 years ago. I hope to see this revived soon but until then you have an amazing story series and really enjoyed the first hope to see this come alive once again!

Author last seen 2016...... yeah this story is definitely dead as fuck. Shame too, I enjoyed the first one.

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