Hello, and goodbye, *Bang*
Earth's Guardian of darkness, Kurosawa, or Dark, has been thrown into Equestria in a very odd turn of events, 'I'm here too!' Pinkie please calm down you get to brake the forth wall as much as you want in the story. 'Okie-Dokie-Lokie!' Anyway let's see what happens shall we?
There will be blood and some gore but not until WAY later on so I'll put up the 'Dark' tag when they show up. and some romance here and there.
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I will be tracking this, nice story, good setup, a few spelling and grammer errors, but, nobody's perfect.
Like it so far!
not bad, commence tracking in 3.. 2.. 1
TRACKING
wow, my stories are not that liked.....
I'm sure people like them, it's just that:
1: Stuff just kinda happens. Like there's no pacing.
2: There's no real flow to the dialogue.
3: The mane char kinda acts like a kid, (not sure if he's suppose to~) but it breaks the story for me. Like this kinda stuff doesn't happen, even if he does have magic god powers (in my mind anyway).
402889 he is suppose to act like a kid, anyway I'll try and make it better and would you like to see Dark in any episode from session 1 other then the Gala? I have a big huge story planned out for that.
Party of one would be my choice :D
402926 sweet,
first
he is so fucking random
428145 You bet!
I liked first two chapters, then it became far too random for my tastes.
428461 I'll dim it down a bit, then
LOL XD
Now thats funny
pretty cool bro It's IGHT!
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the manliest pose there is
554670 Good job.
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555161 Now too bad.
555177 that is awesome I must say.
When's the next chapter of htis coming out.
I want it now.
555226 In a bit, but it's going to be short.
555234
In a bit usually means tonight or or days.
Specific pl0x
555251 Just a few hours or so,
I'm writing a new story, won't take to long.
555280
YAY.
Morning stories for meeeeeeeeeeeee
HEEY
ONE MORE THING
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I'M A WALRUS
555292 If you say so.
yay
Edit: Instead of saying session, you should say Sequence like in Assassin's Creed
557069 Hmm, maybe in later chapters.
Captain Morgan pose
CALLED IT
557379 You we're right, congrats.
I believe this calls for a
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VICTORY DANCE
557399 You have the right to dance,
This is geting good what the hell am i saying its ben good
wait what
wasn't he about to get drunk
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jeez, I had to jump over to title just to make sure
there wasn't a tragedy tag added
633502 Later, when we get into the sad stuff.
633484 Next chapter.
633515
sad foreshadowing?
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I'm sorry, I must have zoned out there for a minute. What just happened?
Cuz I could not follow any of that
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652473 He got shot into space by pissed off Twilight and missed most of everything, I don't use lines right from the show because Dark is there and it changes EVERYTHING!
653433 You amuse me, I'm sorry.
Yes, yes. Short I know but live with it it will get more epic later.
Makes me wonder if you even wrote this, you sure you wrote this teacher? Its also funny as hell!
771525 With some help yes, yes I did.
I wish I could meet him, like you night. buuuut I have to wait til after death
by that time, my form will be immortilized and I'll be with my creator in heaven. you best visit teacher 
Short chapter but, hey, I am tired as all hell.
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why
no so fuking sad shit.