Hello, and goodbye, *Bang*
A young man by the name of Connor finds something he would have never have expected
DISCLAIMER: I do not own MLP:FIM or 'My Little Dashie' and please go easy on me. And if someone could would they draw me a cover thingy for this? I would very much be thankful and give you a shout-out. thanks!
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Oh man, seems like it's gonna be a long read. I am gonna track it and read it in the morning, but for now here is a thumbs up. Because I am the main character of the story
245840 i thought i was. lol
gods every time I read this I cry manly tears
246787 CONNOR CLUB!
247904 WOO!
From what little ive read i think im going to like this story ill have to read it later I dont know what keeps makeing me read storys like this but I just cant get enough
250968 well I hope you enjoy, first time writing a story like this.
Except for some of the dreadful grammatical errors I'd say you managed this quite well, some parts of it might've been a tad bit rushed but in the end it was a decent read.
Now I'm just gonna assume that you are around 14-15 years old?
If that's the case it helps explain some of the errors in there and for someone your age you pulled it of in a good manner, if you are going to try and make more fanfics I really suggest you get someone to proof-read it for you, it makes such a huge difference.
Good luck in the future!
251178 thanks for the advise
Many tears were shed today
251950 everytime I re-read it it makes me cry, so you have not shed these manly tears alone
Manly tears....
If I wasn't so sad I would probably go like: PONIES Y U KEEP APPEARING IN OUR WORLD AND MAKING US BETTER!?
Good story aside from grammar mistakes here and there.
Try reading the ending (you will know it when you read it) And lessening to Cosmic love by florence and the machine at the same time
Here's a hint to you people.
The wait is over.
There are a number of spelling and grammar mistakes through the story, and you were telling the story, and not showing us.
It was a really cute and nice story, I loved it! (Except the above reasons kind of bothered me, its a good story)
I KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN!
(Seen a MLD sequel which I think is going to be a bit like this)
364273 so you know what is going to happen hmm? Enlighten me
364813 Should I? On this comment thread?
SPOILERS?
Main character (Connor) gets taken to Equestria and turned into a pony!
You've made his pony form already, that's how I know
365639 you sir are right, Because that is already up
I'm thinking about putting up a better version of this, you know without all the spelling fuck-ups and grammer bombs
365647 Good plan!
Also, I'm not a sir.
365653 then madam, my apologizes
365657
That's okay
365657 Waitasec, Father Night? Is that you? You're Connor, right? Henry's been trying to contact you for some time now.