Lightning Dust's dream of being a Wonderbolt is on the verge of collapse. Just moments ago, she was the standout among this year's enlisted cadets.
She left the academy dejected, her confidence shattered. Still, she knew what she had to do. This would not stand. She would overcome being discharged from the academy.
Little did Lightning Dust know that her resolve would betray her, causing her to become her own worst enemy.
The suppressed thoughts, feelings and fears that lurk in the back of one's mind can manifest themselves into the most horrifying of dreams. And Lightning Dust is about to find herself locked in a dream she cannot escape from, one that she can't control.
Edited by MythrilMoth and SubShock
Special thanks to Sarkastik Menace and Weeping Angel for proofreading
This feels like it is about to become one very messed up read, probably.
Finally, I'm glad someone addressed this.
She is dead and this is Hell.
Oh, so she is a coma. Interesting. Usually the only way to wake up in these stories is to admit something or find something about yourself.
So far so good
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Thanks! The next few chapters should be pretty interesting.
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Yeah, I never liked how Wonderbolt Academy ended.
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Well, one of the working title iterations was 'Lightning Dust's Personal Hell'. But she's not dead.
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Yup, she's in a coma. Not that she knows what's going on.
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You're welcome
and okay 
Oh no! She is cycling through a dreamscape. Hmm... can Luna enter a coma? It's not really a dream, dream.
Lightning Dust, a pony who took a wrong turn trying to get back to the academy and is now a permanent resident...of the Twilight Zone.
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made me lol
That's funny... I didn't realize it till now that the prologue has no spoken dialog in it, at all.
Interesting! I look forward to seeing where this goes from here.
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Thank you! I got a bit distracted with Teatime, but I plan on posting another update here soon.
It's been six weeks sense I've given this a real update... sorry for the delay people.
The story seems dead, which is a real shame. It was turning out pretty cool. Very creepy, but I'm really getting attached to Lightning.
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Well it's not actually dead. I have a draft of the next chapter some what done, and the original outline (this was going to be a one-shot). I've just been preoccupied with things more than I thought I would be...
Still I'll try to get them out for editing soon, then posted.
4895219 I know what you mean... I have at least three one-shots outlined, and one has a rough draft recorded on site. But you just can never seem to find the time. Then everything slips away.
Hurry with the update! I want to see if this poor pony can escape her mind!
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Is there any chance of this story getting an update anytime soon or is this another fic that will never be finished?
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Given how much time has passed, my moola is on the latter.
So when’s the next chapter pretty interesting stuff