In a peaceful little village in the forest full of fillies, there lived a young filly named Rainbow Dash, who was different from everypony else. For she had no fairy, but she did have one friend named Fluttershy. One day, Rainbow awoke to find a tiny fairy beckoning her. The fairy, named Navi, had informed that the Great Deku Tree had summoned Rainbow. The pair hurried to find that there was a great evil inside him, and the two had to fight to defeat it. Once he was saved, he told them that there was a great destiny for Rainbow Dash, that she had to save the land of Equestria, and have to overcome every challenge that faced her. But Rainbow was up to the task, and up to being a hero, a hero of time!
This is my first story, so some constructive criticism would be helpful. Thanks! I hope you enjoy!
Characters will be changed accordingly and or frequently. Updates/changes will happen a lot, too.
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Meh. Really should write more and better.
>>AwkwardTaco Okay! Thank you! I'll try to write more and do better in the upcoming chapters! Thank you again!
Which is it? Father or Brother?
3847641 Sorry about that! It's the brother!
I feel that you are pushing the story too much too quickly with little detail. It feel ruin as a story for being as small as it is. Maybe you should add a bit more detail between sections and add more background, and you have the potential for a great story.
Thanks for reading, raw666
I can' wait for the next chapter!
