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Inthretis


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The Doctor regenerates into her eleventh incarnation, a loud-mouth, competitive rainbow colored Pegasus mare that switches constantly between total lethargy and extreme hyperactive energy. Also she explodes rainbows when she goes too fast. Gonna have to work around that somehow.

After crash landing the Tardis, the Doctor meets Scootamelia "Scootaloo" Pond, a young filly with no one around her to help when she needs it.

Now armed with a new companion and body, the Doctor will now travel the universe to solve the mysteries surrounding the Crack, the Silence, and the mysterious Rarity River Song...


In case it isn't completely obvious, this is a Doctor Who crossover fusion fic, and will contain massive spoilers to Seasons 5 & 6 of Doctor Who. If you are not a fan, you will get lost. Otherwise, enjoy this tale of absurd proportions.

Originally called "The Doctor Dash" but was changed because this new name is better.

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Comments ( 30 )

@Inthretis...

1. Just a refinement suggestion for your title... Instead of "The Doctor Dash", I might suggest "The Dashing Doctor" for better wordplay.

2. I am guessing by the character tags that Rumble will be taking on the role of Rory Williams to Scootaloo's Amelia Pond? You do need a Rory to go with your Amy.

3. If you really want to keep things within the Cutie Mark Crusaders, yet story-twist things...
~ a. Scootaloo = Amelia Pond
~ b. Apple Bloom = Rory Williams
~ c. Sweetie Belle, Rarity, and Minuette (Colgate) = Professor River Song. All the same River Song, but different points in time and regenerations, as befitting the character in the DW-series.

4. Considering you have a fan-fiction using Applejack as Captain Jack Harkness, it might be better you tied the same character to this fan-fiction, rather than have another pony for the role. Such overall story ties and cohesion makes you the Author look clever.

5. Oh, and you should include a Doctor Whooves character-tag, even if he is not in the fan-fiction directly, it is part of your central story theme & premise.

Hope this helps.

Hey look up the Tennant episode, 'The Poison sky'. Its where he gets a biological daughter...I'm not making this up, shes a timelord, kind of hot headed, jumps head first into things...for some reason she was never mentioned again after that episode. :rainbowhuh: aaanyway! Im not trying to highjack your fic or anything but what if...the Doctor was the Doctor and his daughter, who regenerated > :rainbowkiss: < shows up?

This is just an idea that has been in my brain for ages!!

Heeheeheehee OH MAI GAT. This is gonna be SO. AWESOME!!!

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Thanks for the feedback!

#1 might work, I'll think about it.
#2 is maybe... wait until the next chapter (whenever I have the time)
#3 is no, I've already planned out the roles, with those characters taking different niches
#4 This is totally unrelated to CAJH, with Applejack being the 9th Doctor in this one.
#5 Maybe? Personally, I think the entire fandom made Time Turner/Doctor Whooves/(insert alternate spelling her) their crossover wish fulfillment. Yes, this would make it easier to find my fic on this site, but honestly, I want to write a fic without using the stock Doc Whooves character, he is just as fine as Time Turner (but way more boring, so I am just excluding him)


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Go write it then! I've already set up the characters for my fic, and I know who Jenny might be, but will probably only appear as a one-time appearance in this story (at the way way end)


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Yes, yes it is.

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She's not, she's the Seventh Doctor.

So...Rainbow Dash is the Doctor?

:rainbowderp:

I'm sold. :raritystarry:

:rainbowlaugh:

And an immediate thumps up for originality too, how the DEVIL did you ever come up with this idea? :pinkiehappy:

Only complaint is that I love the idea so much that I wish you took it a step further and devised whole new storyarc to go with it, rather than borrow so heavily on preexisting Doctor Who canon, but either way...this should prove an interesting read. Very interesting indeed...

Hopefully I won't have to wait TOO long before I can read more. :twilightsmile:

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Originally, it was part of Captain Applejack Harkness, my other story. I was going to have Applejack find out all five of her friends were the Doctor, and that her search for him had ended in the most ridiculous way possible. I scrapped that idea when I realized that it completely screwed up the entire plot.

So basically an aborted story idea, then rehashed into this piece of randomness.

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Oh, that's the best kind! Rehashed story ideas are always good because you've taken the time to think through them twice, and work out more of the kinks. :pinkiehappy:

:rainbowkiss::pinkieh:twilightsmile:appy:
FINALLY! I've waited so long for something this good to come up

Have you cast all the Doctors yet? I love casting The Doctor with ponies on the show.
i always pictured Rainbow as 8, but 11 makes soooo much sense in hindsight!

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Heck yeah, I have! They'll be revealed in chapter 2

DUDE!!! Words cannot express the amount of awe I'm feeling! Easilly one of the best DW fics I've seen in a good long while.

the doctor dash. MORE MORE MORE.! :fluttershysad:

It was about five feet by five feet, and about seven feet tall

Wait, that would mean it was five feet tall, five feet across. You need to remove the 'by five feet'.

Nice, finally got this off my list. Like it. :pinkiehappy:

I definitely want to see more of this. 'Tis exciting!

So who is the Master in this universe? Trixie?

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I will one day, darn it but it's just so hard considering I'm trying to do the eleventh hour justice.

Trixie? She's the sixth. Master? Spoilers.

Sweet, an update!

On the whole serious/hilarious issue, I'd cast my vote for serious, but still kinda light-hearted. Awesome and exciting rather than grimdark, if you know what I mean. Sorry if that feels like vacillating, but it's how it is.

Also:

her dastardly rival who once had a carrot cutie mark

Carrot Top is one of The Master's incarnations? Oh, wow. I'm going to make the unsupported assumption that she clashed with the Applejack Doctor.

On that note, it could be fun to see flashback chapters of previous Doctors' adventures, because while the Rainbow Dash Doctor is as awesome as one would think, the others would be exciting to see as well, maybe to give a little contrast in their behavior.

You have a really strong story foundation here. I hope you'll make as much of it as you can. Geronimo!

Hey, an update! :pinkiehappy:

Still say you need to take it a step further and not model it quite so closely on preexisting Doctor Who cannon, but I'm still liking what I'm seeing nonetheless, and who knows, maybe you still plan to shake it up further still in later chapters. Dunno what your plans are.

Anyway, awaiting for more! :twilightsmile:

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The situations are the same, but the characters are different. This is basically a story wondering how Doctor Who would have been, but with entirely different personalities. If Rainbow Dash was a genius alien that traveled through time and space, how would she solve the problems? That is the whole point of this.

5149839 And I get that, and it's not to say it's a bad idea because it's far from it.

It's just that, thus far, it's still been the same story, except getting told perhaps a tad quicker in terms of pacing.

But hey, I still like what you've done thus far anyway, so I guess if you keep doing that, we'll be all right. I'm just trying to throw out suggestions anyway. :pinkiehappy:

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A chance for divergence in the plot hasn't been able to happen yet, but definitely soon.

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Then I look forward to it. :twilightsmile:

This story is awesome and I can't wait for more chapters! :pinkiehappy: for the serious or hilarious question I would say it needs to have about an even amount of both. :rainbowdetermined2:

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Didn't you hint at it? I think that it is Carrot Top

So let me get this straight, Rarity is Melody Pond? You're making her Scootaloo's daughter?

Firstly: Hilarious. If you want to make your version of Zero a discount Discord go right ahead.

Secondly: Please continue.

Thirdly: You've given me an inspiration to do a similar story with Pinkie Pie and the Fourth Doctor. For the record, I am making it compatible with yours, except I'm using Apple Bloom as Sarah Jane Smith instead of Granny Smith. It just made a little more sense. Please don't call plagiarism, I wouldn't be doing it without your story.

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