• Member Since 29th Mar, 2013
  • offline last seen Dec 1st, 2023

BAR0SS


T

Wind Slash is a pegasus, but he works as an apple farmer in the town of Appleoosa. He doesn't mind, but his boss can't help but think that it's not right and tries to get him to fly again.

But there's a catch.

This is a prequel story for my bigger one. Its just to give my character more of a back story.

Will have two parts. Sequel should be more obvious by the end of this story.

Please comments and give feedback.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 24 )

Yes, Yes, Yes. This is perfect. The first two chapters and wow. This story seems to be great. I can't wait to see if 1. Rainbow Dash recognizes him. 2. How is he going to react about her wanting to be a wonderbolt. 3. Will he get a pegasus job. 4. Who is his family. Best of luck. I really like this story.

3799717 its not so much this story I'm concentraiting on. Its the sequeil I'm more intrested in, me and my friends

I don't hate you. Might as well get this out of the way. Best of luck in writing the next chapters. I can't wait for Wind to start falling for Dash.

3835322 Shh. Your not supposed to say that

3835696 Sorry. But they make such a good couple.

Great fanfic! Can't wait for more! :rainbowdetermined2:

When shall there be more? :raritydespair:

3903250 when my friend finishes proofreading it

I loved these chapters. Corrections are needed.

"That you Wind.

to

"Thank you Wind.

My head told me that, it time, and if I worked on it,

to

My head told me that, in time, and if I worked on it,

I was thinking Soarin was Wind's brother, and now I know. This story is shaping up. I can't wait for the next chapters. I wonder will we soon learn who the girlfriend was. Best of luck with future chapters.

rainboom huh? looking forward to rainbows reaction

3925550 can ya guess who his ex is?

3926041 Yeah, but I don't want to say it here and ruin it.

Love this story. :rainbowdetermined2: Can't wait for the next chapter

Comment posted by frostingblossom deleted Feb 26th, 2014

I'm glad this story was updated. I can't wait for the next one. I called it though. Spitfire was the ex. Didn't realize it till you pointed it out, that she does have brown eyes.

When will the next chapter be put out

4581518 well that depends. Now that I have finished mass effect 3,I plan to re-read my story and possibly will end up rewriting the last chapter.

4004433 you should be warned about this as well because you said you like this story.

4583223 Okay. Thanks for the warning.

4584407 ok, so I think this story is really rushed.

Oh Gawd. I knew this was coming. I knew it!:pinkiehappy:

I bet it's Soarin. He has to be his brother. And his Ex is probably Spitfire.

4723586 but what you dont know is where this story is going.

Login or register to comment