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Selene Bright
βI love you as certain dark things are loved, secretly, between the shadow and the soul.β β Pablo Neruda
Selene Bright
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As usual, you fail to disappoint friend. keep them coming
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Thanks man.
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So first I don't really do dark fics, but you set the tempo quite nicely. I like how you pushed the Bella's personality with wanting to kill the slavery for free.
I am sad to see this fic dead it had potential, my one side note not that you will probably come back is she acted really surprised when she heard Celestia had a job but then quickly turned and was like no big deal. I think the shock factor could have been played better. Also don't see.much solo Diamond action thumbs up there. Hope this helps
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Thanks for the comment!
I may raise this story from the dead at some point but as of right now probably not. I worked pretty hard on this and I didn't get any feedback for it. I mean I didn't even get hateful comments, I got silence and several downvotes. So, I kinda gave up on it.
This story actually looks pretty good so far, hope you still plan to continue it at some point.
I honestly don't see why this received the amount hate it did. I hope to see it continue.
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