After a young pegasus saves her friend, a unicorn filly named Sweetpetal, she has to be taken to the hospital. There, she is diagnosed with a disease that the doctors can't seem to do anything about. Before she is admitted to the hospital, which becomes her home over the course of her life, she makes a promise that she'll be friends with Sweetpetal forever. But forever never lasts very long, as her illness makes her incapable of moving. Before she dies, she returns the one thing her friend lost.
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This is my first serious MLP fan fiction, and I'm still a bit of a novice writer. I hope you all enjoy the story anyways. It was kind of based on some things that happened in my life.
Whoops. I almost forgot to mention that there will be two different endings. You can choose which one you want to read depending on how you think the story should end.
Death is a touchy subject in my family. My aunt died. This reminds me of her. Thank you. You earned a like.
3792996 I'm so sorry that happened... Is it a good thing that the story reminded you of your aunt?
Thank you for the like!
I...wow. The feels.
3793652 Whoa, was it really that good?
3793657 I do believe it appeals more to people who have lost someone important to them...yes...this was good.
3793771 That makes sense. I'm glad you like it!
3793821 yes I am too
Excellent work.
3803519 Thank you!
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actually, this story literally illustrates her last moments with us. Great job, you should write more. You obviously have talent in creating feeling.
Almost forgot:
a moustache, a favorite, and a like for you!
No, you need MANY MOUSTACHE!!!!!
3836297 Holy moly, why do people like this so much? And I'm sorry for replying so late, school takes up a lot of my time since I'm usually dead tired afterwards.
3917722
I get to damn much homework as well, I understand.
Read again... cried...again
3941980 Well, the happier ending is coming out next.
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GOOD.
3960919 It's a bit on the long side, though.
3962089
SHIT.
3962197 Would it help if I said that I was going to split it up into parts because it was so long?
3967594
YEP!...WAIT... IS THEIR ANY GOOD REASON WHY THE TEXT SHOULD BE HUGE AS FUCK?
3967827 I DON'T KNOW
3967886
sorry...
3967921 No, no, it's okay. I was just trying to go along with the joke, so to speak.
3973928
Nah, It's okay!
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oh yeah, i forgot: is the happy ending out yet?
3975271 Not yet... It's almost done though.
3975871
Yay!
IT'S FINALLY HERE!
3978245 Is that good?
3981580
hell yeah!!!
3981580 Its a good story. Hey want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?