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Bracing for epic...
I noticed one error with the AC bit... but I believe Firenze got blown up in ACB... and for the love of all sanctity, you shoulda made it Trevor meets changeling... that would lead to more... interesting events... and not Ezio. And WHY did you make Ezio use altir's name?! Ezio wouldn't do that.
but good start none the less.
3786318 Ezio is being careful and stealthy, so he used a fake name, can't be too careful, y'know.
As for why Ezio met the changelings, that will come up in the next chapter.
Is lee the only one not armed to the stratosphere?
out of all of them I think Wilson is going to be the one who is okay with it and either Trevor or john loose their shit
Trevor is Canadian, not a Redneck.
3787465 shit, fuck, ABORT, ABORT
LOAD ALTERNATIVE REALITY
-Los Santos, in an alternative GTAverse where Trevor is a redneck-
(Trevor sequence)
alright, saved,
3786839 none of them are especially armed except Trevor, here's the rundown:
Trevor: every goddamn weapon in GTA V, stored in his hammerspace pockets
John: BR (Halo 4 model, 108 rounds), DMR (Halo 4 model, 42 rounds), and an M6H (Halo 4 model, 36 rounds)
Lee: a meat cleaver and a super secret surprise.
Ezio: poison hidden blade, hook-shell hidden blade, and an old sword (read: 'sub-average' sword)
Wilson: dark sword, gold axe, shovel, and pickaxe, and a glorious furry golden vest.
Michael/Guide: just the copper pick, axe, and shortsword from Terraria (average between them is about 5 dmg)
3786909 much shit will be lost, and the legendary 'fan' will find the shit.
3787756 John is a living tank even unArmed,ezio can counter-kill anything ,Michael has crafting and near unlimited possibilities,and the same goes for Wilson....lee might need to borrow a gun from trevor
3787598 Hate to bust another bubble, but Trevor is a redneck and a Canadian, he get's real pissed when someone files him under a Canadian stereotype.
I ain't so keen on they way you did Ezio in this one.
3797715 right now he's just kinda confused about his surroundings, and trying not to show it. In my defense, he's seen some shit, so he's probably not as affected by this as a normal person.
Long story short: Ezio is currently focused on finding out what exactly the hell happened to him.
why is Lee a bit of a dick he really isnt like that unless people are jerks to him first or threaten.
Also I'm confused is it ezio or Atlair in here because i heard both names.
i like the story and its funny
3801667 Lee is coping with being half-walker, Ezio is using Altair's name as a cover
Since Lee is still technically infected, the virus affects his mind, giving him bouts of acute anger at random times, especially when hungry, he won't go full walker, but is driven to feed like a walker.
Ezio is concerned with stealth, so he doesn't want to use his own name on the off-chance that somebody knows it, so he uses another name that is both believable and memorable
All the heroes are coping with their own unique weirdnesses, so that is why.
I hope that this is enough justification
I just want to ask since I forgot to earlier, do you watch PaperbatVG, because when I heard the qqqqqqqqqqqqqqEEE!!!, I immediately read that in his voice and thought of his Walking Dead series.
Anyways, cool story, but every once and a while, the dialogue gets a bit confusing.
3810397 Yeah, I got the idea from Pbat, he's an awesome guy.
In my head-canon, the qqqqqqqqqqqEEE!!! thing is actually a phrase that Lee's dad taught him in order to do things well, 'Now remember Lee, if you ever find yourself needing the strength to do something hard, just remember this phrase and repeat it in your head: qqqqqqqqqqqqqqqEEE!!!'
On the dialogue thing, I color-coded the dialogue for that specific reason, the text-color option is very useful.
Here's a helpful display
"Trevor speaking."
"Master Chief speaking."
"Lee speaking."
"Ezio speaking."
"Wilson speaking."
"Michael speaking."
"The text color named Twilight Sparkle."
"The text color named Rarity."
"The text color named Applejack."
"The text color named Pinkie Pie."
"The text color named Rainbow Dash."
"The text color named Fluttershy."
"Celestia is yellow."
"Discord is brown."
"The paladin guy is either orange for Golden Crest (Celestia), purple for Evening Warden (Luna), 228b22 AKA forest green for Emerald Embrace (Cadence), lime green for Mirror View (Chrysalis), or pink for Shift Perspective (Discord)."
"Luna is dark gray."
Lots of colors, but I'll manage it, I always do.
just to clarify mihiceal from gta right.
3818804 no, Michael is the name of the Guide from Terraria, y'know, the guy in the bottom right corner of the cover picture.
The one made of pixelated art.
That guy.
Gray shirt, blue jeans, no criminal record.
Him, Michael the Guide
That Michael
Chapter 1 - 4600 words
Chapter 2 - 6500 words
Chapter 3 - 6500 words
Chapter 4 - 7500 words
I like where this is going.
3830235 I hope so, I like you, as a person, and a fan, and as a person.
Yes I said 'person' twice, I really like you as a person.
*leans in close* Are you ready to fucking read some shit?
3830439
Lets do this like there's no fucking tomorrow, mothafucka!!
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YEAH READING IS LUNADAMN AWESOME!!! READ SO HARD YOU FUCKING SNORT THE SMELL OF THE MOTHAFUCKING PRINTING INK!!!
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READ THE FUCKING DARK ARTS AND CAST ALL OF THE MAGIC, MAGIC IS THE SHIT, MAN!!!
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SUPER READING 9001 ACTIVATE!!! CAST ALL OF THE MAGIC AND GET RID OF THAT BITCH CELESTIA!!! NO LONGER WILL TRIFLES OF POLITICS COME BEFORE NATIONAL EMERGENCY!!! MAY TWILIGHT TAKE THE SUN!!!
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Did I go too far? Hell no I didn't
Let's dedicate a LOL for Berry Punch, who had triple vision and saw three Ezios and thee Dashies. Let's give a round of applause to Ezio for being a clever bastard.
Hard Cider is just wine with apples. *pfffft*
Multi-crossover?
Hm...
awesome story! :D Can't wait to see what kind of shit they have to battle! (more terraria bosses?
)
3889587 um... thanks...
*gives it Ezio to give to Pinkie*
Ezio: Um... ASSASSIN! (points at you with his poison blade extended)
3790536
Except for projectiles
Okay, so first chapter read... here's the lowdown...
Pacing was awkward, to say the least, but considering that it's your first try at this, I'll give you a pass.
Trevor's character is half-and-half. The opening didn't sit well, as he's equal-opportunity evil, and hates bigotry. When he has sex, it's more along the lines of 'LOVE ME, DAMMIT, LOVE ME!!!' Trust me, I played GTA V, extensively.
The rest is interesting though. Glad you look up to me.
4169257 thank you for the tips, it's nice to know that you like it, considering you inspired a great deal of it.
BTW I never played GTAV, but I couldn't think of a better character to put into the story to be Pinkie's counter-part
Okay, Second read, colors for text is actually not necessary here.
And Trevor does not like to mention his Canadian heritage.
Okay, getting better, but tone down the language for the ponies and Discord, it's jarring to hear Celestia and Discord curse so freely.
I do it, but only to emphasize how serious the situation it, or for humor.
Also, it looks like it's at the near beginning of Season 3, just after the two-parter.
Good job so far, I can see the difference in just three chapters between Ch. 1 and Ch. 3. I hope Trevor doesn't introduce Pinkie to Meth...
Okay, so you're doing great.
When the time comes to do Trevor, call me up, I played GTA V.
4169504 yeah... I think, I honestly can't remember what time I had set for this story to start at...
wait, no, the cover page says that it starts between S2 and S3, so this is actually just before the two-parter
also, Celestia only spoke so vulgarly because Discord drives her crazy, and Discord is the equivalent of a 19-yo, 9500 / 500 = 19,
so technically, despite being, like, 3 times older than Celestia, he is developmentally almost 2/3 her age
my head-canon is that Celestia is developmentally about 30, and Luna is 21. And Luna is like 9.001 x 10(100) times more awesome, because Tia's a lame stickler (both a stick in the mud and a stick up her ass), and Lulu's the Patron Saint of Badass Bitches
does this message answer any of your queries? ALSO! Meth? Powder, liquid, or crystal?
Trevor: fuck it mah home-boy, MIX ALL THAT SHIT TOGETHER!
Dang that was deep.
You just forced a reference. And the reference wasn't even that good.
The Tucker one was good, but other then that...
#getrektm8
4733417 that comment has given me the drive to make the Requel
I hope people like it.
4733441
And just when I want to fave and like it
4734881 Dude, I'mma release some minor, encrypted spoilers.
The HIP, HOOUP, HYAAAAH
The redic
The quiet newbie
The creepy kid with a ticker
The psychopath with a dildo
The craftsman with fists of fury
Here's to new possibilities and new setup, YAAAAY!
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
*Sigh*
Oh well...
We should get on to other stories.
Funny thing is, I was gonna reboot Six too.
We are so in sync.
It was gonna be less fantastic, with the same dudes. (Except Link, that was gonna be a different Link.) Maybe add some new guys too.
Need some Candy Corn now. NOM!
4737906 funny enough, my new story has Link, but as Magic, rather than Kindness (really, he could fit 4 of the 6 roles alone)
the rest are a mystery until the story's released
4738849 Link
Link
Link
Link....
Damn, so many Links, so little time.
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4738870 to narrow the field of possible answers, I'll give you a hint
It's the Twilight Princess Link.
Also, I think the only 2 roles Link couldn't fulfill would be Generosity and Laughter, just because he's neither of those two types of people.
4738943 Dude, he's a stoic kelptomanic. Why wouldn't he be?
I'd play up the greed if I were you, make him not so perfect.
Seein this as a canceled story makes me sad
, but a part of me is telling me to take this, and finish it, because this is just beautiful! I like the story, the characters, how your going with it, then blam, brick wall. If you allow me to, I will gladly take this story and finish it, because I know I'm not the only one that misses it
Nigga...
Noooooo
....fuck