I noticed one error with the AC bit... but I believe Firenze got blown up in ACB... and for the love of all sanctity, you shoulda made it Trevor meets changeling... that would lead to more... interesting events... and not Ezio. And WHY did you make Ezio use altir's name?! Ezio wouldn't do that. but good start none the less.
3786839 none of them are especially armed except Trevor, here's the rundown:
Trevor: every goddamn weapon in GTA V, stored in his hammerspace pockets John: BR (Halo 4 model, 108 rounds), DMR (Halo 4 model, 42 rounds), and an M6H (Halo 4 model, 36 rounds) Lee: a meat cleaver and a super secret surprise. Ezio: poison hidden blade, hook-shell hidden blade, and an old sword (read: 'sub-average' sword) Wilson: dark sword, gold axe, shovel, and pickaxe, and a glorious furry golden vest. Michael/Guide: just the copper pick, axe, and shortsword from Terraria (average between them is about 5 dmg)
3786909 much shit will be lost, and the legendary 'fan' will find the shit.
3787756 John is a living tank even unArmed,ezio can counter-kill anything ,Michael has crafting and near unlimited possibilities,and the same goes for Wilson....lee might need to borrow a gun from trevor
Okay, so first chapter read... here's the lowdown...
Pacing was awkward, to say the least, but considering that it's your first try at this, I'll give you a pass.
Trevor's character is half-and-half. The opening didn't sit well, as he's equal-opportunity evil, and hates bigotry. When he has sex, it's more along the lines of 'LOVE ME, DAMMIT, LOVE ME!!!' Trust me, I played GTA V, extensively.
The rest is interesting though. Glad you look up to me.
Bracing for epic...
I noticed one error with the AC bit... but I believe Firenze got blown up in ACB... and for the love of all sanctity, you shoulda made it Trevor meets changeling... that would lead to more... interesting events... and not Ezio. And WHY did you make Ezio use altir's name?! Ezio wouldn't do that. but good start none the less.
3786318 Ezio is being careful and stealthy, so he used a fake name, can't be too careful, y'know.
As for why Ezio met the changelings, that will come up in the next chapter.
Is lee the only one not armed to the stratosphere?
out of all of them I think Wilson is going to be the one who is okay with it and either Trevor or john loose their shit
Trevor is Canadian, not a Redneck.
3787465 shit, fuck, ABORT, ABORT
LOAD ALTERNATIVE REALITY
-Los Santos, in an alternative GTAverse where Trevor is a redneck-
(Trevor sequence)
alright, saved,
3786839 none of them are especially armed except Trevor, here's the rundown:
Trevor: every goddamn weapon in GTA V, stored in his hammerspace pockets
John: BR (Halo 4 model, 108 rounds), DMR (Halo 4 model, 42 rounds), and an M6H (Halo 4 model, 36 rounds)
Lee: a meat cleaver and a super secret surprise.
Ezio: poison hidden blade, hook-shell hidden blade, and an old sword (read: 'sub-average' sword)
Wilson: dark sword, gold axe, shovel, and pickaxe, and a glorious furry golden vest.
Michael/Guide: just the copper pick, axe, and shortsword from Terraria (average between them is about 5 dmg)
3786909 much shit will be lost, and the legendary 'fan' will find the shit.
3787756 John is a living tank even unArmed,ezio can counter-kill anything ,Michael has crafting and near unlimited possibilities,and the same goes for Wilson....lee might need to borrow a gun from trevor
3787598 Hate to bust another bubble, but Trevor is a redneck and a Canadian, he get's real pissed when someone files him under a Canadian stereotype.
Okay, so first chapter read... here's the lowdown...
Pacing was awkward, to say the least, but considering that it's your first try at this, I'll give you a pass.
Trevor's character is half-and-half. The opening didn't sit well, as he's equal-opportunity evil, and hates bigotry. When he has sex, it's more along the lines of 'LOVE ME, DAMMIT, LOVE ME!!!' Trust me, I played GTA V, extensively.
The rest is interesting though. Glad you look up to me.