A pool boy by trade. A rocker at heart. A writer by soul. And not afraid to show my face.
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That was awesome! Can't wait for more!
This is very well written. I mean, there is not a single technical flaw with this whatsoever.
3783815 What about the story aspect? does it sound alright?
3783854 I personally don't care for it, because it simply isn't my type of story, but for those whose type of story it is, I'm certain it will go over well.
3783920 ahh but this is one stitch in the grand design. I always make it a point to have huge dramatic climaxes This first chapter is small beans honestly
3783942 Well, I wish you the best of luck with it. I won't be reading it because, as I said, this just is not my type of story.
3783956 fair enough, though when it's featured you might not have a choice
I feel like you've got this down pat.
I'm definitely interested in seeing where this goes.
Liked, but the system won't let me fav yet.
3787291 Oh yeah sorry I havent submitted it yet
But thank you very much!
excellent story u have my favorite
thi is strange.......... wil you give a reason why celestia is having him executed? knowing celestia, and considering a mere decade since banishing her, she would still be grieving and feeling guilt over it. she would probably feel she deserved being attacked.
3792849 maybe Celestia doesn't want him executed, but... we'll see what happens
A treacherous protagonist unnamed and unknown, the tyrant Celestia, and an age open to all sorts of world-building. Just what tale do you have in store for us, sir?
3792925 It won't be a super long story, but it will have a dramatic climax. I can guarantee that.
3792855 interesting. especially want to know her thoughts and motivations here.
The first thing i thought was celestia shat on my grave
3814776 Regrettably, no.
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Oh, thank luna! Just thinking that put disturbing images into my brain.
Now reading this for Review! Stand by.
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Wow... That was deep.
The irony is razor sharp.
If he'd worked up the nerve to talk to Luna, she might not have felt so neglected and then all of this might have been avoidable.
Shame this one will likely never be finished.