I had apparently passed; I just wasn't told, not yet. I guess she was hoping for me to fail on my own; even after I had managed, what she pulled over me?
What I had realized, is that I had apparently a tail. Since I had not freaked out; but rather just continued on my assigned work, I had passed the initial test. It's not easy, you may say; and it is true. It's not supposed to be, after all.
Of course she had forced me to change the initially planned design. I can't wear the skirt; unless I make adjustments, in order to leave room for the tail she just gave me. A two inch thick tail doesn't just go through the fabric of the skirt I had intended to make; and which that, I had been forced to improvise. I guess the element of improvisation is a part of her test?
I had started out, just checking how the material chosen was stretching around the dummy provided; it is a first step in making my dress fit on the intended target body.
For a moment, I was trying to stretch the material around the body of the target body; then I lean towards, just how many seams a skirt would require, in order to have the intended fit. Thinking back at what I had been wearing; I came to a conclusion, four seams seem to be the ideal compromise between the fit, and the effort in creating the intended garment; considering the amount of lost materials.
Somehow, I had the feeling she was watching me intently; but then I felt a smile slowly growing onto her lips, spreading out over her face as I got into my work. Of course I was enjoying what I was doing, not just because of the great materials supplied, but also; because it is what I enjoy doing in the first place. At least, it is what I used to enjoy doing; and I had to confess, I still do enjoy it, this far. I may not know, just what she was to through at me, later on; but first things first. Right now, I am enjoying it.
Cutting the quarter inch thick material aside, I soon managed to press the finished parts onto the dummy, feeling it coming together fairly well; no gaps, and no unevenness to bother me; hoping she thought I had been on target, close enough for keeping her confidence.
“That does start to look interesting!” she pointed out; as I had figured out, just how to work the seams of the dress I'm working on; even though I'm still a way behind, on how to make the new and special adjustment.
“Thanks!” I pressed, just as I finally managed to finish the final seam; thus completing the original design, pulling it off of the body of the dummy; before examining the seams, in order to see how well I had managed to get, what I had originally set out to do.
Since the seams not only looks smooth, but feels smooth, both inside, and out; I guess I had managed the initial target accomplishment? Not that I was about to ask, right now, in part; because I had to make a few minor, and a rather large adjustment, in the last moment.
First I simply added the hole intended as exit for my tail; since I had imagined I was to wear it. Then I cut out the material, intended to make the hole more than just a cut out exit. The first part is the rubber that goes around the tail; I decided on a two inch width of the strap, not including what was to integrate with the skirt where the hole had been cut out. Then I placed the material around the hole, making the initial seam and fusing it into place; making it a single garment. Then I cut out, what I figured was to be required; in order to reinforce the garment, in order for this in particular; holding together for long-term use, even if it was to be slipped on, or off; when one was in a hurry, and had little to no time, caring for the skirts durability. I managed to put this into place, making the seam, before I had gotten anywhere further. Then as it is a solid mass, after the final seam; I guess it had been completed?
Now I moved over to the next step of my project, the top. Cutting out the details, patch by patch; pressing them onto the dummy, seeing as they kind of stuck into place, for the time it takes me to create a seam; thus fusing patch by patch together, until I had completed the entire top.
Looking closer; the top was to reach from the lower edge of the rib cadge, all the way up my neck, and cover both my jigglies, including my nibbles; that incidentally were showing fairly aggressively in the chosen material and the hue it was; but also a handful of inches along both arms. Naturally, I had chosen to work with the same material. Not just in order not to need to swap, but I felt comfortable with what I'm working with.
Something came over me, and I chose to take the chance; risking it on a pair of gloves. Cutting the patches required, only now I was working on a light pink; almost passing for a skin tone, on my part. Patch by patch coming into place, seam by seam; holding the garments together, as it slowly fused to the two separate garnets. Just a pair of gloves, as it were; but it did complete the suit.
Only now, I chose to allow it to be considered finished and complete.
Umm... her name is spelled Rarity.
Is English your second language? Your writing isn't too bad you just need a spell check and editor for grammar.
3778326 I know. I just haven't quite gotten to her part in this initial segment of the story.
I'm pondering whom to choose next, maybe she would take the third spot on the walk?
3778348 1 its rarity 2 learn to spell and 3 ITS RARITY
smh
WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO WOO
Special Alert: Failed to spell a main character's name correctly in the description AND title!
3778348 But that doesn't answer my question at all...
You spelled her name wrong throughout the whole story. It's spelled Rarity. Rearity is a fantastic nickname that Rainbow would give her, but that's not how her name is spelled.
Is English your second language? Dyslexia? Because with an editor and some spell checking this could be pretty decent.
3778348 i dont wana sound mean but just no no no no no its rarity
3778443 I haven't even introduced 'Rarity' into the story yet, and she doesn't own this shop either.
You need to learn to recognice and handle puns, considering this show?
if it isn't the show with antics all over?
On the other hoof, I guess it did catch your attention, even for all the wrong reasons?
3778483 hmmm i shulda read it first haha my bad
3778483 Right, so you decided to make a different character that holds the same profession as Rarity, but has a name that makes it look like you can't spell?
Cause everyone is going to say "you spelled Rarity wrong" and the description only reinforces that.
3778458 since everyone is making a point out of it,
Rare-ity and Rear-ity are two entirely different characters.
I picked up the idea from an image I stumbled across, but even if I find the link, it's a NSFW flag on it.
Do I have to explain further on this?
If you have red any of my other stories, particularly the once at Mibba(if it is safe to mention other sites?) you may see the point?
Now, on the other hoof, if you still did read and like the story?
3778464 Maybe I should have that nick for her, someplace, if Dash is in the vicinity, having her remarks out?
3778477 naeh *giggles*
on the one hoof, you look more like the 'cry-baby',
on the other hoof, more of the repeating of the same message, all over and over?
I had not even had the time to read the first, before the second was in?
3778530 how about you have a class from Flutter shy?
I'm not deth, but I do have a problem with loud-mouths
If I do have a few typos, I guess Spell check missed it, and I can't find the Equestrian English, sadly.
I'm in the process of getting an editor/proof reader, if it all panns out, I will go over every story.
3778509 I am so totally using Rearity as a nickname for Rarity from Rainbow.
"Hey, check out that her Rearity."
"Oh? Are you enjoying what you are looking at, Rainbow Dash? If you are or aren't doesn't matter to me, other than you could have asked instead of staring at it!"
"...Everypony stares at your rear, Rarity. And you like it."
"That's not the point!"
3778591 you could have a 'Stand Up' story, starting on what you've demonstrated.
for all I could see, you should have people enjoying all the puns?
I was expecting a punny reference to a Rarity with a round, perfect ass.
Hence, "REARity".
3778616 But Rarity has a nice ass...
3778607 I do. It's my writing in general.
3778652 I'd predict a reasonable influx of readers.
sounds like fun. now you just need to have the first chapter up on the site, so we can all enjoy it?
3778651 isn't that what it was all about, from the start?
If you wanted to avoid the pile of downvotes, you should've just hyphenated her name.
Rear-ity. Then it would've been a little more obvious, and would have intrigued people.
But it just looks like spelling is not your forte otherwise.
3778955 Anglic isn't the most easily spelling.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
I could give you that ..
On the other Hoof, why are everyone jumping on this story, it's not even my first 'Rearity' story in the first place.
is it 'Fashion vs Toy-Dolls' ??
if they are 'Neigh'ers, fot that, I'm still listening to the 'Yay'ers over them.
Neighing doesn't save or build up the world?
You need the Yay for that, since you're just telling us over and over how everything was tried or impossible?
On the next hoof, maybe I should dig up some of their dirt and write a new story, featuring them? just a suggestion, no promis as of yet ..
3778984 Your comment made absolutely no sense.
3779000 taking it from the top, can you read any language, other then Anglish?
3779020 I can read and speak fluent English and German.
What you wrote was neither.
3779044 I've been writing in Anglic here all day.
The point is, you have a basic comparison, which of these two would you find easier spellingP
Gramma not considered for the moemtn?
3779736 I hope the story is more entertaining ..
3779821 I guess I can see how some see the choice of name a bad call. The coincident of her having the fashin, may not be open to the pun as intended?
At least, this time I did leave more then enough room in the 'Summary', for this, as opposed to many of my stories of late.
I said that I pulled it through a 'Spell Check', but I did never claim to have been using 'MS Word', right? I can't judge the quality or reliabillity of either. Though it does help me sorting out numerous typose, sparing you of the first draft looks of what it would have been like. I can as well confess, I'm prone to slip typos, and I make numerous of them.
Thanks for pointing out these, I'm going over them right away, check later if you think I'm just saying I will? Though I know it wouldn't do me good, avoiding the inevitable, since I wwanted people to enjoy the story, why else bother publishng it? Even if I do wright for my own joy over all else, who doesn't? I'm not a paid Author, as much as I may wish so, from time to time.
Maybe the enjoyable one is my greater success here? I have put some work into it, just as much as the story as such. I write with inspiration, not on disipline.
On the final note, thanks for the comment.
People don't know how to read the description. Yikes.
3788284 but they sure are awfully opinionated, huh?![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
3788390
My opinion has always been either provide constructive criticism or get the fuck out. They should skedaddle.
3788545 I'm all with you, even if I may have worded it slightly differently?
too easy to just jump somepony, without anything worth sayin?![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
3788717
especially on the internet
3788776 hidden behind the safety of the Anonymity. I guess it may feel like fun?
either they're just enjoying the thrill, or think they're justified to eaven a score, forgetting I never went out to hit them down.
3788284 That's sad.
What's depressing is that most of them have no stories up, when I checked.
maybe not even a blog?
I'd dare anyone ho consider these unsuportive complaints, demonstrate a story of their own, so I know what their reading standards are like.
3788284 He edited the description when everyone yelled at him. They're not completely at fault here.
3794693
Okay, let's go back to the part where everybody yelled at him. Some of the replies were:
Oh, and there's the part where someone told this person they need to learn to take constructive criticism 3779821. That's funny, only thing I see here is idiots leaving brain-dead comments, certainly not anything constructive. I don't care how bad the grammar was, this kind of shit is what got Train Wreck Explorers shut down.
3794693 just ONE question, why are you on this story in the first place?
doesn't really look as if you actually did read it, you're just in on the free ride.
3794742 I guess there are level headed people, even in this mess?
if I read you right, this is just the common troll?
they seems to be everywhere, just to see how much problems they could cause us?
I wish we could be firmer on them, since they apparently have no interest of the group itself?
I guess I did not know of that, but I can't be everywhere?
for the sake of reference, I have an account at mibba, with a bunch of stories.
You may thing of them what you will, that's your problem.
I came here with these stories, in hopes for more interest, since it is themed for this site in the first place.