When a meeting with a corrupted being causes Princess Celestia to change into something…chaotic. Princess Luna must find a cure while Celestia battles her hidden inner demons.
Will Luna and her friends find a way to cleanse this evil or will Equestria see the creation of it’s greatest villain?
(Adventure quest worlds/MLP FIM crossover collaboration)
Written by- Calls212(dialog and writing) and ElderChaos(story idea and writing)
Calls212- http://www.fimfiction.net/user/calls212
ElderChaos- http://www.fimfiction.net/user/ElderChaos
Proofreader/editor- Blood Lord: http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Blood+Lord
Cover Art by- Midnight_SparkX- https://twitter.com/Midnight_SparkX
Chapters (5)
I helped out with the dialog in this story please rate fairly and constructively ok.
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No promises...
Who am I kidding? I hat putting people down, so I'll read later and comment then! Sounds interesting though!
I like it, mostly as I've played AQW
3775095 I have never played it but as I stated in my blog you dont have to know the series to enjoy it.
Well, look at you. Finally got it published.
3775188 with the help of my collab partner calls212 i actually got the ball rolling for once.
3775206 Well, aside from Celestia's 'I'm the strongest around' dialogue (feels a little unlike her to boast like that, even in the face of a villain) it looks good so far.
Man, to think that the evil lord of chaos and darkness himself is the same prissy little pushover from Dragon Fable...
oh no celestia is willing become evil soon i hope what going on in next chapter soon?
Alright chapter 3 should be here soon and just for warning the pinkie I choose for the next chapter is the one I remember her most as the trait that does work well that's a mystery that you will find in the chapter
I hope you all enjoyed this chapter I had a blast writing pinkie pie and her trait that I remember her for, her 4th wall breaking.
Awesome story can't wait for more
3861920 Thanks for the positive feedback and it may be a while i have school and all but i will get some work done on it.
Another Chaos Lord? Interesting. By the way, has the 13th Chaos Lord been revealed yet?
3921801 idk never played aqw ask elder.
Um chapter 5 will be delayed for another week. It is a very important chapter and it will take a while. Apologies to everyone waiting for this next chapter it will be up though.
The dialogue between characters is very dull. As for the whole "says *character*", there's always a way around it.
Like so:
You see? Normally I frown at fics being written in present tense because it seems to messy in places-- particularly with the dialogue. It gives a strong feeling of telling, is what I'm saying.
But of course, I'm not here to tell you how to write your fic. I'm just the guy who reads it.
EDIT: Obviously things may change and I'm just on ch. 3 of this fic, so I should probably read on, no?
4003739 Yes you should because it gets better.
3921801 to answer your question no the 13th isn't being reviled till this summer(i hope)