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RaiderRy4n


What the fresh fuck

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Spike would sneak out of the library every night and sit on the bridge between the town and the Everfree, just to think. More often then not, the night ends with him wallowing in self pity over the mare he love's. One night however, Rarity finds her 'Little Spikey Wikey' and she realises something of great value.

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Check me out. Way earlier than first. :trollestia:

361695
Oh look! I deleted your comment! :trollestia:

361696 :| Y u delete my comment bro? It was there for 6 days! It wasn't hurting anypony :'(

You guys now the favourite button is there for a reason, right? Not to sound snobbish but... It's a one-shot... that means I ain't addin' to it.
:trollestia:

Cheesy, but damn it was sweet! :raritystarry:
Loved it Ryan! Make us more! :pinkiesmile:
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Give me a hug brony! :twilightsmile:
-Glassed

361707 K fien >.> Still mad that you deleted my comment >.<

Loved it... every single bit of it :heart: Truly heartwarming. :pinkiehappy:

a few minor problems with tense, but a very nice story otherwise.

keep it up. :twilightsmile:

:moustache:

that is all

Rarispike supporters are always the best writers. Great job, loved the story. Have a mustache. :moustache:

362035
Hmm... I prefer Sparity myself... But I thank you for your splendid moustache. I shall stroke it while gazing at my computer screen, silently whispering

'Si Sinorita, si...'

Oh, and 'Bueno'

WOO

362051Yeah, I suppose that is a better name for it.

Usually not a fan of Sparity, but you wrote it well :rainbowkiss:

Danger! Danger! Spike needs an adult!

Thank you so much for this fic i really needed to read something bittersweet like this for inspiration for my own.

Take all of my ponies as thanks.

:ajsmug::yay::pinkiesmile::rainbowkiss::duck::derpytongue2:

:pinkiegasp: ALRIGHT EVERY PONY... FOLLOW MY LEAD!!! READY SET.... D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :pinkiesmile:

362464 Um, no? That wasn't a troll comment, if I wanted to troll you I would've been more creative.

That was an incredible story, the only thing I don't like is that IT WAS TOO SHORT:,(

Absolutely loved this story. Yes, it's kinda sappy, but definitely a great Sparity story. Kudos.

Beautifully written! I applaud you!

Cute doesn't begin to describe...:heart:

I am genuinly confused as to why this is still getting noticed... :facehoof:

A very nicely written story. If things happen a bit to quickly for some people's tastes.

such a great story.:raritycry:

hmmm maybe the fave stories are looked at by followers of different authors? :pinkiehappy:
ps, extremely late u=awesome here. annnd a little grammatical whininess. feel free to ignore it

Grammar suggestion: "Spike pulled his knees close and hugged them for comfort, resting his head on his knees"
consider changing either the first knees to legs, or changing "his knees" to them. :twilightsheepish:

kinda cheesy but who cares any way!!!!:pinkiehappy:

This was full of all sort's of Dawww i absolutely love it :pinkiehappy::heart:

D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW:twilightsmile:

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