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Twilight is interrupted during breakfast and finds someone she once knew sent her a letter. An old antagonist seeking something only she can give while she still can.

This is a very short while before the season 3 finale.

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SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #1 · Jan 10th, 2014 · · ·

This actually feels like something that we could see in the show. Trixie writing a letter to apologize to Twilight for what she did in the past.

Cryosite

Cryosite #2 · Jan 10th, 2014 · · ·

Why no Trixie tag?

JustAnAcquaintance

JustAnAcquaintance #3 · Jan 10th, 2014 · 2 · ·

why is trixie apologizing to twiligth? it should be the other way around, and should be responded with a swift kick to the stomach.

Frankie2

Frankie2 #4 · Jan 10th, 2014 · · ·

3763340 Probably because the author wants to readers to figure out for themselves who wrote Twilight that letter.
In any case, this is a very intriguing story. A lot could come for this, but that is up to you.

ILurvTrixie

ILurvTrixie #5 · Jan 10th, 2014 · 1 · ·

...So many dangling plot threads. I look forward to the continuation if there is one. Or if not, then I shake my fist at your convulated chekov gun emplacements.

Cryosite

Cryosite #6 · Jan 10th, 2014 · · ·

3763811
Poorly executed then; I only noticed this story due to it showing up in my feed for a new story being added to a couple of Trixie groups I'm in.

Impurity

Impurity #7 · Jan 10th, 2014 · · ·

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Thank you.
3763414
I'm not sure I follow. Why would their positions be reversed?
3763737
No words you're pretty much spot on.
3763811
I will be returning to this. It'll start right after Trixie left the town and continue past this I hope. I don't like breaking literacy laws. Chekhov's gun will be followed but not for some time.
3764031 Poorly executed if I leave it like this? Or the story in general?
And just a question if you don't mind me asking. Can anybody just take my story and place it into groups without your approval or notice? Because I've been asleep since posting this until now and I never saw any notifications or anything.

Cryosite

Cryosite #8 · Jan 10th, 2014 · · ·

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"poorly executed" refers to the story being in Trixie groups if the identity of Trixie is supposed to be a secret. I still have not read the story to offer any reasonable criticisms of the story itself. I suppose I should be upset that something was spoiled, but then had it not I would never have seen the story to know to read it. Catch-22 there.

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The author of the story gets no notifications simply for being the author. You'd get a notification if you were in the group, just like any other member.

Perhaps you could have put a line like this in your long description:
"Please do not add this story to any character groups, and please do not spoil things in the comments or they'll be deleted."

Not that it would have stopped anyone, but maybe they'd choose to follow your wishes.

Impurity

Impurity #9 · Jan 10th, 2014 · · ·

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Okay thank you very much for the info. I just assumed if anything was put into a group I would receive notification. Thanks for the clarification.

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #10 · Jan 10th, 2014 · · ·

3763414 For the first time around yes. But the Alicorn Amulet incident only happened because Trixie rejected Twilight's help, and as she said in the letter, amulet or not she was still in the wrong for wanting to best Twilight the easy way.

starship55

starship55 #11 · Jun 15th, 2015 · · ·

I would like to see a sequel to this very much. Trixie has entered another dimension, to go on an adventure, she doesn't know if she will come back from. who is diemos ? it sounds like the beginning of a dark fic.

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