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Matthais Unidostres


I am Matthais Unidostres, I'm a Christian and I love FanFiction!

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When a pony arrives in Ponyville and begins using the Stare to steal whatever he wants. It's up to Fluttershy to stop him. But Fluttershy promised never to use the Stare on another pony. But when an innocent life is at stake, Fluttershy may have no choice.

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Phi

Lemon Demon, seriously?
gotta read this

BULLSHIT

How the fuck did he lose?

This is just like mass effect 3, it was good until it turned into liquid shit at the ending.

VERY interesting concept, I liked this a lot! It was a short one as well, like a simply FiM episode would be. Not too much detail, it kept moving along at a pretty break-neck speed and then it was over with. With great power comes great responsibility, so says the Fluttershy. *nods* :twilightsmile:

Angel sang out, in an beautiful verse
as Fluttershy broke, Necro's curse
she delivered as Stare, with the power of many
to save the soul of a little filly

One thing that sort of caught me off guard here was the name "Necro."

It feels kind of like one of those Rule of Cool names that you often see applied to OCs in fanfiction.

Which doesn't entirely strike me as a good thing, I guess.

339061
It's called the "Power of Friendship" Ya know, the premise of the ENTIRE SHOW! :flutterrage:!

339364
Nice! Pinkie would be proud!:pinkiehappy:

I love stories about Fluttershy's stare! It's such an unexplored topic.

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