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Ponies on Celebrity Deathmatch 3

Still another story with the ponies hitting the Deathmatch ring. Match-ups: Spike vs. Prince Blueblood, Applejack vs. the Flim-Flam Brothers and Princess Celestia vs. Tirek.

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Cirnothebrony #1 · Jan 3rd, 2014 · · ·

How come this have soo much dislikes? I really liked it :)

JusSonic

JusSonic #2 · Jan 3rd, 2014 · 1 · 1 ·

Ugh. Some folks has to be critics. No comment.

Jake The Army Guy

Jake The Army Guy #3 · Jan 3rd, 2014 · 2 · 1 ·

*have to be

While I love the concept—CD is one of my all time favorites—your execution(huehuehue) was off. Simple grammar mistakes, lots of blatant telling, obvious errors( you say Princess of the moon is in the match in the opening, then it turns out to be Celestia), and random tense shifts.

The concept could be great, but you need more practice.

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