Author's Note: First fanic! Don't expect to much on me. I have revised the three chapters and starting to create the next one. Some scenes may contain foul languages and some unintentional sexual situations. I made the Cover art
Story: Griffin Wing was having miserable life in being a loser in mostly everything. When suddenly his life stumbles with an old archive book and sends him to a world named "Equestria". The world was inhabited with colored ponies and different mystical creatures. He must find his way home with the help of some known ponies, but as they get closer to their objective, a mysterious pony tale haunts Griffin.
Chapters (3)
Okay first things first,
Why did you name Equestria the world? Equestria is the country that Celestia and Luna rule over, in case you forgot there were the Griffin, the Zebras, the dragons, diamond dogs, ect. And they all have their own kingdoms.
Okay I couldn't help but start to laugh my ass off on this borderline sexual joke. XD
Also, I'm one who tends to poke holes in things so here's one.
How did she grab him if she doesn't have fingers or magic?
Hmm I guess with her forelegs, but that would need both and she needs to walk as well.