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Bendy
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I won't disagree with you there, Celestia also acted a bit petulant/childish then one would expect for a genocidal maniac (unless all that killing and brainwashing was finally taking it's toll on her with Luna and Twilight dying at her hooves being the tipping point).
Though that bit at the end with the natural ponies helping to turn the newfoals human again and rehabilitate them (i.e. undo the brainwashing) is an interesting concept that could make for a good story.
Very rushed but enjoyable
Not mcih gore through
Oh well good story
G-Man, is that you?
Thanks everyone, this intended to be a comedy and shows what might happen if TCB Celestia enters not only the wrong universe but also tries take on the multiverse.
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You with his knowledge of The Combine, he very well could be.
Seeing Tyrant Celestia getting being killed in a horrific way. Great way to start off a new year.
Demons, gore, AND ponies dying!?
Fave'd!
I approve because I hate Xenotia winning
I'm actually tempted to help you rewrite this into a much well written story. Perhaps add some names to the gods and beings.
Still good for a start off and rushed kind of deal.
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Yeah, I could consider a rewrite in the future. As others have said I could expand on this story. I could show more of the war, and the death of Luna and Twilight Sparkle by Celestia.
And go into more detail on turning vegetable minded Newfoals back Human.... and those who they failed to save like the Humans who died and the cannibalic zombie Humans, whom had to be put down.
On a side note, I still like to see stories where Humans win on their own, or your story where canon Ponies help. Stories where no Gods or demons help, only other mortals help.
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Master Chief, BJ, Artyom the Saver of the Metro, Gordon Freeman, etc.
This fic's inspired me to write my own version. It'll be a lot weirder and creepier than this, that's all I can say about it now.
3732810 Awesome! Looking forward to reading it.
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It's currently 2013 pages long.
3732875 Is it going to be a one shot or a series of chapters? Edit: 2013 pages long? Whoa you write fast.
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Just a one-shot.
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Just wanted to let you know that I published it.
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Good.
I've updated my summary to include a link to your story. Seeing how you linked mine, only fair I'd do the same.
>Well, that was a very poorly written story
I'll agree with that, alðœ I like the idea
I'm pretty sure there was liberty prime, a sectioned and a angry moth in the small army that killed celestia
*sectopod god fucking damnit autocorrect
An amusing quick read, could have used mention of a particular blue box woshing into existence though.
I might expand on the ending of this story, where Newfoals are turned back Human. Other writers can make their own version if they want.
I doubt we would care much. Humans love to give a final "fuck you!".
3859054 yes, yes we do.
Faved and upvoted for honesty's sake.
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I like the sound of that
When celestia thinks she won every space marine chapter and imperial guardsmen regiment rips the multiverse a new asshole and rekts equestria for the imperium!
I'd be more apt to say
and then came the rain in fire and invisible death, as humanity had loaded the ultimate f-you, the ultimate warrior, the ultimate killer, trillions upon trillions of bacteria and germs on space stations and orbital platforms. all of which hardened by lower gravity to be death and destruction, as well as a few engineered ones, and they fell on missiles and escape pods ... the wiped out plagues of earth, created or natural swept the unprepared populaces.
though few so deadly as one known as the black plague, for while humans had little In coats equines had plenty for flea's and other parasites still, for humanity had such a long time to tinker with them and not all choices so wise.
okay
Like we care. The whole point was to send a giant Fuck You to the ponies and to deny assets to the enemy. Most importantly, it was so we would die human on our own two feet and on our own terms. For honor. Something the ponies are simply incapable of comprehending the very concept of.
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Good point, I'd like to read a TCB where humanity crushed the ponies through biological warfare. Biological, non-human life is unharmed by the barrier, right? So, launching Black Death into Equestria would be brilliant. Especially since we have inoculations against it. Ponies don't.
I feel like a pretty good idea for a fic is here. I mean, an all powerful shadow demon turning up to mock Celestia sounds like an interesting premise here, but...yeah this felt rushed and little of the dialogue was natural sounding. Still, as far as drafts go, with editing and refinement this could be pretty damn cool.
The one bit that really stood out to me was the demon's comment about a human refusing its offer. That bit of dialogue felt natural, it was really elevated above the rest of the fic, and is memorable. If the rest of the fic was of that quality, I'd easily put this in any favorites list.
This was a funny read I like how you had a shadow demon mock her and that she got torn to shreds
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*crie* it was.........perfect, beautiful even. It was good, maybe even the greatest
Uh, if you hate the idea of the potion removing who the person was before, why not simply not include that? It wasn't included in the ORIGINAL Conversion story, so why are you adhering to it?
If you hate the idea of Equestria actively trying to INVADE Earth, why not simply have it be an cosmic accident like it was in the original story?
And the point of the potion was ponies trying to save humans since the magical radiation on Equus was deadly to humans, and pony DNA was just what they had the most readily available. They could just go through the world mirror and try to find new lives on the Equestria Girls Earth afterwards.
I just imagine the Emperor and his sons kicked down the door and let the others in... while they went to slaughter the xeno scum... well except magnus he'd want to study celestia's corpse, and Angron would be slaughtering his way through the guard for fun, Night Haunter would be creeping through the shadows and killing ponies, etc. All Emps would do is let his boys go and kill.
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This is something a year old, and I hate to respond to it, but I keep seeing your comments everywhere and need to address something.
The original Conversion story isn't very good at all. It's misanthropic, you see. Hence, people don't adhere to it as often. What's with this 'but the original story wasn't like that'? Well, this isn't the original story and won't ever be.
Also; that's like asking 'if you hate this trope, why did you make a story mocking it'? The entire story's POINT is to mock these tropes and things we hate. Plus, the idea of the potion removing who the person was before is EXCELLENT story fodder and ripe for mockery.
Because that's both boring and almost always leads to misanthropy. Yet again, the idea of Equestria invading Earth is exciting, PLUS is perfect for mockery, hence, this story.
What's with you and constantly stating 'well this didn't happen in the original'? It ISN'T the original, and you have no basis to state what the POINT of a fictional object in a story based off a story based off a story is something else. It's HIS story. Wait, do you like the original? Did you pick up on the misanthropy?
I read through a few of your stories earlier, and most of your TCB stories seem to be basically 'hey, I thought this thing that happens in anti-TCB stories but not in the original TCB story would happen but it DIDN'T whooaa'. Honestly, that's kind of boring. In order to mock a trope, you actually have to something... clever, with it. That isn't clever.
This ISN'T the original TCB story, this is ANTI-TCB, which is another animal entirely. Stop trying to dictate what should and should not be written.
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Thank you for being honest and sincere in your opinion.