Pinkie Pie on the way back from visiting Applejack finds a mysterious box.
Warning: Contains minor gore details.
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A HUMANOID LOBSTER WEARING DOCTOR'S CLOTHES EATING WITH KNIVES AND FORKS TAKING CHUNKS OUT OF A WELL COOKED PONY. ON A LARGE PLATE!?
EEK!
Man In A Suitcase - Geezer
Ah, Futurama. This fan fiction is sorta ripe for a sequel, so if anyone wishes to make a sequel go ahead.
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Yes, that is the minor gore detail. As you can see, I left most of what was happening in that part to the reader's imagination. And was done as cheap shock value.
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed this fan fiction.
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Nice song.
Yes. Yes.
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You enjoyed this fan fiction?
929889 how could one not enjoy this fanfic
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Hmmm, Humans have a wide range of tastes and interests, so there's bound to be someone out there that doesn't enjoy this fan fiction.
Such as some of the dislikes I've gotten.
WHAT'S IN THE BOX? WHAT'S IN THE FUCKING BOX?
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Why, there's a whole universe in there.
930093 Dislikes? Oh, the little red bar that's smaller than the green one? Yeah, look carefully at what I said.
Why-the-hell-everytime-pinkie-says-something-you-put-it-like-these?
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Because she speaks very fast I guess. Sorry if this annoys you.
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Read like they were written by Fry? Are saying my witting sucks? (Not to say I think Fry's witting sucks) If you are I have to agree with you for indeed my witting does suck.
Edit 2: I feel my next fan fiction may get a lot of hate since Bender Bending Rodriguez is gonna be in it. Let's just say he isn't very nice to the Ponies.
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Thanks for your wonderful constructive criticism, I like criticism as along as it's not blatantly insulting me.
I have taken your feedback into account.
I tend to mostly write in transcript format else where off this site on the Futurama Madhouse), so that may be a good reason why I'm not really that good at writing fan fictions in prose, also having Asperger Syndrome may had to that.
And sorry for the miss wording of "writing" with "witting" I was in a rush making that post.
Edit: I edited all the wrong times where "your" was said in Magical Shiny Land to "You're". And replaced "to" with "than" as you pointed out.