• Member Since 16th Apr, 2012
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SacredSturgeon


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When Fluttershy finds herself growing fangs and sleeping upside-down, she decides she needs help. But is the solution being offered really what she needs?

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This is most excellent for a first story. Do please write more stories miss Sturgeon. I would be remiss if I advised otherwise.

Interesting.
I'd say more, but I have nothing else to add to that.
Do keep up the good effort.

[5] LOLZ XDDDD :rainbowlaugh:

Great story, althought the ending was a little rushed. Keep up the good work!

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Thanks, and I'm fully planning on writing more.
(also, I'm mister Sturgeon. :p )
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Thanks, and I'll definitely try. :3
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I was trying to keep it under 1500 words (on that note: oops), so I could enter it in EqD's Writer's Training Ground, so as my word count rose I kinda wanted to finish it. The fact that it was getting near 5AM local time when I finished the thing may have played a part as well.

This was wonderful! I especially loved the end bit about how much Fluttershy actually eats!:rainbowlaugh:

That was different:rainbowlaugh:

Three apple and two kumquats in two days?! I've heard of people going great lengths to keep their figure but that's just impressive.

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