Oooh~

Oh Boy! New Kaidan story!! Always at those times when busiest, I suppose. I'll check it out after I edit a friend's fic, Pinkie Promise!

#upvote

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So this is why it took you so long to reply to that blog post. Also would I be considered a stalker now?

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yes im reporting you

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Oh? You do realize I just happened to encounter you here when I saw Kaidan posted a new story, I just simply love them! So basically I was being sarcastic

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doesn't matter, you rustled my jimmies and gave me a boner with your fixation on my posts

“My herbs prove a cheap substitute for a mare in heat, what will truly cure you is a stallion’s thick m—”

Very well done, when I first saw this I wasn't that interested but after reading it I'm glad I did. Also there were no mistakes that stood out to me. Either because there weren't any, or your nice story telling distracted me from them. Nice job

Pinkie is appealed

I know you said no editor, but I did it anyway!

Eyeliner and beautiful pained on eyebrows adorned her face.

'painted'
one instance of 'testacle' should have an 'i' instead of 'a', and I think there was an 'over night' that should be one word.

I liked it. I can't help but feel like you got the idea from "A Day At The Pond", the folding, the helplessness, the permanence of the TF..Dammit, Kaidan, stop making me want to be Fuck-Me Flutters!
C'Mere, Maccy! You're going to FUCK ME!!
No complaints here.
yay!

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Easy enough to fix, thanks. I've long wanted to do a doll story, Day at the Pond was the motivation I needed to make it so.

Maybe it's not permanent... maybe after 12 hours, she'll go back to normal? Then, she'll tell Mac how much she loves him, take another swig of the potion, and ask him to keep her folded up when not in use. Who knows, it's not like I'm gonna have sequels as Big Mac turns every mare into a sex toy with doll poison.

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Thanks

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One can hope...One can hope..
Personally I like the idea of being helplessly stuck there, unable to do anything about your situation. That air of finality..it's just UNF.
Let me tell you how happy I am that you did this story though. I dropped my extensive editing job for a friend to read this and edit for you, risked having lots of dreams about Fuck Me Flutters and transformations, and now I can't stop wishing that potion were real.

Why do you always do this to me, Kaidan??! But whatever you do, Don't. Fucking. Stop! Lest Zecora find you and force-feed you the whole bottle.

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Well, you're in luck. Since I'm writing for me, and you like what I wrote, odds are I'll write more like it this week...

And I'll try to get Dollhouse and Dash of Humanity 2 out too... but this is 'me' week to recharge for the upcoming move.

Oh, and yeah... I love the permanent TF's too. I just wanted to leave enough air of doubt for our less devoted friends.

Bad End: It's permanent. Big Mac develops a latex allergy and dies after using Fuck-Me Flutters, who is then thrown away to slowly become insane under an increasing pile of garbage in a landfill.

... Oh, who am I kidding... That's one of the good ends!

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Oh right, your move! I hope all goes well, and hopefully the scourge of humanity's driving force doesn't treat you as poorly as its track record shows.
We need some sliver of your sanity (or what's left of it.)intact, otherwise we'll never know what happens in the next installment of like, all your stories!
Good luck, and DollSpeed, comrade!
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*Squeak!*

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First off, wish you luck for the move.
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Secondly:

Who knows, it's not like I'm gonna have sequels as Big Mac turns every mare into a sex toy with doll poison.

Yes. Please. Oh please yes. And if not the Elements, then just some others that won't be missed. Like, who needs another musician, or dj, or carrot farmer, or a candymaker? Ponyville has dozens of those. They just decided the competition's too stiff and moved away without telling anypony beforehand. Eyup. And he's just got some mementos to remember them.
Smooth, horny, desperate, wet mementos. Almost looking like their eyes are pleading for his stallionhood...

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So many ideas, one of the good ones I had was he gets bored of her and sells her to the Ponyville sex shop, where she sits on the shelf wondering who will buy her next...

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I did think of a nice way to work out a little 'arrangement' between Mac, Flutter-doll, and Zecora's supply of potion to allow for such a thing. Who knows, I plan to write a lot this week of random, off the wall stuff.

Hmm, feels like it needs a dark tag. It was a good read all the same.

*whistles*
Wow, that was really something.

Top marks Kaidan, only you know the way to make 'being inanimate and having a plastic sphincter' sound like the best thing in the world

Dude Kaidan, you have a really creepy thing with writing stories about doll ponies. Twilight's Dollhouse scared the crap out of me. Thank god Twilight hasn't "upgraded" her Big Macintosh doll whenever she gets lonely. And where the flying feather does Fluttershy get off saying Macintosh isn't quite right when she's the one breaking into his house, turning herself into a sex toy and tricking him into fucking her. But if you do a sequel to this, I really hope that Fluttershy tricks Macintosh into taking the potion so she can have her own perfect sex toy for the evening or Evenings. Just jack up the doesage and she can enjoy her perfect sex toy. Complete with multi-speed vibrating shaft, magically refilling white chocolate dispenser, and voice command actions. Because why have a limp doll when you can have the highest quality high-tech sex toy that no shop can possibly match, and actually move as you order it to

I don't know why I keep reading your clop stories when they always leave me despairing for humanity The big objection to porn in general is that it reduces participants to objects. Your stories read like thought experiments in taking that objection literally and actively treating that as the goal. I can't decide if it's brilliant or alarming.
I particularly noticed the detail where Fluttershy becoming a "better sex doll" each time meant becoming less lifelike rather than more, "better" meaning "more doll-like" rather than "more like a real sex partner".

Yep.

Only you.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Well that took a dark turn.

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Actually, objectification in this particular way... is a fairly common fetish. Kaidan just writes it a little better than what I usually see.

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Thank god Twilight hasn't "upgraded" her Big Macintosh doll whenever she gets lonely.

Hmm, that'd be interesting...

... how the hell does this thing NOT have a dark tag?

It seems that Twilight is not the only one to have a dollhouse in her cellar... I wonder what would Big Mac do if she suddenly changed back to normal during sex (I think he'd either freak out and become traumatised forever or he wouldn't notice... still treating her like a doll )

3702657 Spike buys it!

Hmm... Pinkie gets it because hey, it's PINKIE we're talking about, and Flutterpie is always kawaii.

Anyways, she uses the doll, gets bored, and asks Twilight to use a come-to-life spell on it. Fluttershy snaps back to herself, but is still made of latex, and she gets double teamed by Twilight and Pinkie.

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Works for me... but as long as Fluttersqueak can still use the Element gear and take care of the animals, who has the right to split hairs over a pony being furry or inflatable? It's not like she suddenly has a hankering for apple juice and starts sucking the apple crop dry at Sweet Apple Acres...

Oh... was it too early for that joke?

3705824 Nah, not early enough. I'm still waiting for the inrush of flutterfics where she's sucking a different kind of Apple's juice, be it , , or .

I found the ending of this to be quite sad and frightening.

More like this please!

Maybe not with the Dark tag though, but inanimate sex doll transformation? Yes please!

That was a pretty cool idea for a clop. I liked the kinda dark ending. I'm guessing that the other sex toys are ponies that got carried away with the potion before and are now stuck like that forever.

You could make a dark sequel where Big Mac eventually gets bored of Fluttershy and gets a new doll, Leaving Fluttershy forever horny and trapped folded up. Hearing him use the other doll every night instead of her.

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If you only knew how much those thoughts and many similiar ones were running through my mind..... I have been home 9 hours and written zero horse-words because of all the ideas.

..... I demand a sequel/more chapters plz

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I'm hoping to sequel this and the other balloon story soon, because more latex balloon ponies / sex dolls!

Needs more mind alteration.

Nicely Written. But I feel bad for Fluttershy being trapped as a doll. I do hope in the squeal if you write one that she turns back to normal and maybe force Big Mac to be her doll for a while. Though I could see her do that with her friend showing them the "Kindness" of being a sex doll can be and maybe even keep them forever as well as her Big Mac. As for Zecora. I'm a little surprised she didn't inquire about the "Fuck Me Futters" to Big Mac. It wouldn't be about it or maybe even ask to see it out of a curiosity of sorts. Thus rescue her when she's not in use. As for Twilight not sensing it. Honestly doesn't feel right. Even if it's a potion it would have a magical effect which she could have sensed. But maybe she did sense it and was keeping quite about it. Maybe for you own amusement. That or maybe to sneak in to take Flutters for herself like she would have the hots for her or something. Just some food for thought I suppose. Then what about Fluttershy's animals? Angel would have found the note and showed it to somepony so maybe that's how they find her. You could always have somepony come in and still some of Big Mac's dolls so she get's passed around or something. Oh look at me I'm rambling here. But I'll leave you to your thoughts on how to continue this. Enjoy -evil smirk-

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I think you did a good job meshing MLP with the dolly fetish. That said, if you've not already found it, you might want to go hunt down Grommet's Plaza which should provide a plethora of ideas to subject Equestria population upon, heh.
dashie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw1526_small.jpg
It's an adult story site so the usual warning is mandatory.
Thankfully, it's also not so riddled with ads that you'll be stomping popups and noisy banners.

p.s. Yes, they have a Ponygirl directory but it's not ponies. Er, I mean it is. Sorta. It's not pony ponies.

Naughty dragon= bad dragon

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Congrats, I'm going to be reading this on my channel. It will be up soon.

and you've actually inspired me to maybe write a similar story. Not the same premise, but objectification is a kinky thing to think about.

I hope to see this continue and please make it dark.

Twilights smart, but now, she's not that smart... Actually... You did Twilight perfectly, because she doesn't think things through until she realizes her mistakes, and since it wasn't her mistake, she can't think it through to tell Mac, so now Fluttershy's stuck like that until Mac leaves her inflated for more than twelve hours.... By pure accident of course.
God dammit fluttershy, you never think things through enough, do you?

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You should realize that there are a lot of people who enjoy being objectified. I've seen a lot of porn involving people being reduced to just being tables, footrests or even urinals and it was all consensual and fun for both of them.

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Go check out the Balloon Ponies group, if you haven't already! There's five inflation/deflation/balloon creation stories up so far, and there will be more to come! I look forward to (maybe) seeing your addition!

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That's my favorite non-mlp fan fiction site actually. I've been ponifying several of my favorite stories from there (mandy's milk -> applejack's milk machine) and am planning the automatic duct-tape mummification one next. Ponies need lovely fetish clop too!

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Thanks for the reading. Objectification is definitely a fun fetish.

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The fact it's desirable to be less life-like and the more object-like is fun. It could also be horrifying. Imagine how hopeless Fluttershy must feel, becoming more and more doll-like, thinking like a doll... trapped, folded up in the closet for who-knows how long, longing to be used by Mac... to get release Like most fetishes it just has to do with being powerless.

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She doesn't seem too upset about it. I like to think if Fluttershy reverts after 12 hours, she wouldn't want to have sex with Mac until she had more potion.

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There are many ideas to consider. I like to imagine Fluttershy turning back to normal, but still craving the sex-doll lifestyle. She learns to brew the potion for herself, and begins increasing Mac's collection of dolls... a Lyra doll, a Vinyl doll, soon Twilight gets suspicious of the disappearances. Fluttershy has no choice but to alter the potion so the effect is permanent, and give it to Twilight...

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I haven't done Pony -> Sex Doll using a machine/factory yet. So that'll be soon.

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Living Latex stories.... I've wanted to do that too. So many good ideas, so little time. I've seen a series on Deviant Art where one of the mane six turns into a 'goo pony' / latex pony, and slowly absorbs and converts the other mane six. I just don't have enough time.

3710854 Yeah I figured Gromet's Plaza was your inspiration. I love that site too! Now, for some of the other fetish stuff! :D

Loved the Applejack milk story btw. Mandy's Milk is one of my faves there.

3710854 living objects in general usually fascinate Mr, but that's probably because I like stories "Indian in the Cupboard" and others like it.

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Grommet's one of my fav's too, mostly because there's several updates a month but also because the ads are just image banners and not full-video speaker-blaring pop-up-hell-spawners. Nothing gets me to leave a site faster than annoying ad spam.

But if you're really looking for fun latex fetish art that runs the gambit (anime, furry, and human), try googling the artist Sebastian Rubbermage. His personal site is a good starting point although it's very slow on updates. His Yahoo group, Bastian Sketchworks, has a lot of his more recent works as well as any livestream session art an hour after he's closed the stream. There's also a BBoard Bastian Fanworks that has a lot of handy links and even a wiki based on the stuff he's dreamed up over the last 20-some-odd years.