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The Crusaders are looking for the perfect gift for Scootaloo. Twilight is testing out a new spell on Rainbow Dash. When Twilight is distracted for a minute, the crusaders whisk Dash away leaving nopony the wiser.
Will anypony realize the incredible Rainbow Dash balloon is more than a pool toy?
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I wake up to this.
THIS.
Dammit, Kaidan, I didn't mean to literally not stop!
Now, where'd I put that wing tape?
I'd like to see one of the balloon ponies pop! Maybe a spell that causes ponies to suddenly inflate and burst into little tiny plastic shreds? would Pinkie burst with streamers? THE POSSIBILITIES!
That's probably not what Dash meant when she told Twilight to blow her...
That slice of life tag is very questionable.
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Well, for certain values of "slice of life"... Some slices of life can be weirder than the others.
Needs a "with," I think?
Another amusing update. Now with less clop!
Balloon ponies! Balloon ponies everywhere!
Also, congratulations, Twilight! You've put one of your friends in danger again!
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It's what she is best at.
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Your wish is my command. "Popping Pinkie Pie" coming right up!*
*actual existence of this story may vary.
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Celestia must have heard how badly Dash wanted Twilight to blow her.
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Just an ordinary day for a pony turned balloon.
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Well, I blame you, because I just wrote a darkfic exploring the topic.
Warning! The ending is nothing near happy. Actually, you might cry. I blame you.
I haven't posted it yet, but you'll see it in due time...
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Too bad, the only thing that was blown was Dash's ego...
Why does this remind me of Toy Story 3?
Nevermind that. This story is very... umm. Strange. Good, but strange.
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Here Ya go! It's here for reading glory!
years later Rainbow is found by Twilight and when she is turned back to normal she is completely insane and constantly muttering something about revenge and Twilight turning ponies into toys
Well. That was a good, if slightly horrifying read. Time well-spent reading, though.
...but did anypony else think that maybe RD was entirely too calm, even through her dread-laced realizations of her situation getting incrementally, then exponentially worse? She certainly wasn't enjoying things by any stretch of the imagination, but were I in her horseshoes, I think within ten minutes my stream of thought would have been "LETMEOUTLETMEOUTLETMEOUTLETMEOUTLETMEOUTLETMEOUT" or words to that effect.
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Here's my take on the ending, I'll even use do it dialog style with pony emoticons to show reactions :D
(and and Photo Finish is going to the icon for the orphanage director because we're short on icons.)
~~~~1 month later~~~~
*knock knock on the front door*
~~~~3 months later~~~~
~~~~5000 years later~~~~
Doctor who reference in the authors note!!!!! Lolololololololololol!!!!
Oh lord...
This story is begging for an epilogue!
Only when I went to bed I noticed the Fridge Horror aspect of this story: The package with Rainbow Dash has been never opened in Fillydelphia!
this is going to become a thing with you isn't it
Whats up with the inflatable doll stories. they are cool stories but the endings are downers, anyway keep up the great work
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I'm going to write some with happy endings. Not everyone has played so much Corruption of Champions that they love bad ends.
I vote for the hair remover sequel.
11th doctor fan? The author note was a reference to Matt smith as the Doctor. His favorite phrases were "bow ties are cool" stensons are cool" and " fezzes are cool" (Doctor Who)
I just want to see how it all ends. There doesn't seem to be any confirmation that Dash is stuck, but if she is, that's still kind of amusing (just a little).
Reading through the comments, it appears I wasn't the only one to think of Toy Story 3. But I can still one-up the connection:
...That was a bit longer than I intended. I'd better stop myself.
And now I want to expand it into a full story. If I get permission from you, that is.
Anyway, great story you have here. The transition from one situation to another is neither sudden, nor obvious, but a balance of the two. And the mentions of previous Dash-pranks were both highly amusing and served to ground the story into the wider world and feel of Equestria.
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Go for it, balloon Dash is best protagonist for a story.
This is messed up dude first the fluttershy blow up doll and now rainbow dash does nopony even think seriously scoots mom just folded dash up like two minutes before twilight showed up they stories where their lost forever just piss me off seriously their depressing, that's not to say they aren't good but the elements would be detectable by twilight since its her magic that gave their elements life.
4827577 somehow, for whatever reason, you write in a way that makes me confusedly disdainful of you, like I'm judging a book by its cover... I'm being honest here, you didn't flip out or anything, more just stated the events and ridiculed the authors choice of story basis. You also assumed that she could be able to detect the elements because their elements magic is connected. I can see why you think that, but are you saying that there was a moment in the show where twilight used the magical connection to find the others? Although concepts such as that have been made in other shows and books, like the chaos emeralds in sonic x, I don't think that it's been made in my little pony. And even if that was possible, to find them using magic, it doesn't mean that she already knows how. And don't say that she does because she's magically gifted. Being gifted doesn't mean knowing what and how to do something from the get go, you have to learn. She might've found rainbow using the same method, or maybe she followed the trail of breadcrumbs. She has eyewitness accounts of the balloons, and because of celestial, virtually all government connections she could need. An orphanage is usually run by the government in some way, not to mention files on moving businesses, external documents on orphnage locations (like licence records) and countless other files. I do not think that twilight would stop until she found her, not to mention search parties and government officials, as rainbow, being an element, is a militaristic asset. She may be too late, rainbow could be lost, popped, whatever, or she could be saved. People die.
Well, anyways, the genre of the story is clearly stated as dark. You do know what DARK means, right? It's, a lot of times, sort of like a mix of sad and horror,generally including things such as torture, rape, murder, depression, suicide and self inflicted wounds, unfair events, unsettling ideas, so on and so on. I'm sorry to be so condescending, but the tab that says dark is basically a blatant clue of a warning to all that the content in this chapter is going to be cold, unfair, and immoral. And, because it warned you, you basically lost all rights to complain about how messed up or unsatisfying the dark turn of events left you, because really, your complaining about the genre of the story, not anything that was universally wrong with the story. Now, I'm not saying that your opinion is wrong, and, technically, you weren't complaining, though there did seem to be elements of it. It's just that I think this might be a needed reminder. Well anyways, see ya.
Reminds me of toy story 3... Well, anyways, you did good capturing the cruel, twisted of emotions of a dark story, not too over the top or in your face, just subtly rearing its hope deterring head as you read. Though, I didn't really see this as a slice of life story. Ah well, I liked it.
4452825 Please do that sequel badly drawn turtle! Although, I, just a single soul, personally think that if you do, please steer a little farther away from toy story. I think I used too many commas, haven't I? (Plz don't answer that)
Yay! Imma use more commas now!
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I have many things that I wish I had time to write. This is still on the list, but… well, I'm not good at getting things done. If I ever do get around to it, though, it would stop at borrowing the basic premise of Toy Story: Toys can talk and move, but don't let humans (or ponies, in this case) know about it. I wouldn't really want to take that away, since Toy Story + Rainballoon was the idea in the first place; but I wouldn't be going any further than that (no plot copying or character cameos, for instance).
And you can never use too many commas; or semicolons, for that matter.
Alright kids, playtime is over in an hour. have fun.
This story's so fuckin' ballin'.
It was good, too bad the strange ending
now there just needs to be a chapter 2 and maybe more after
Perhaps you could write about dash getting out , and twilight getting turned into a doll ?
Well surely Twilight will be looking and the crusaders will notice Dash is missing and they'll search Equestria over for her, so there's one reprieve.
and also
....Rainbow you jerk...
No wait! What happens next? You can't end the story like that! Does she get out? What becomes of Dash? This feels like a bad ending! Nooooooooo!!!!!