Only a short time has passed for the newly crowned Princess Twilight Sparkle, and her newfound title is already being put to the test. Deep in the heart of the Badlands, an old enemy stirs and threatens to destroy Equestria forever. After healing her wounds, the mighty queen of the Changelings, Chrysalis, has returned with a new seething hatred for everypony, but she is not alone. From the deepest bowels of Tartarus another enemy writhes from his grave with the same ambition, the dark lord of shadows, Sombra. Now Twilight and the gang must race to find allies to rise up and stand against the impending march of the King and Queen's monstrous army. But will the Mane 6 succeed? Or will they witness the destruction of their home, first hand?
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An incredible prologue for what will be an incredible story.
4084977 Thank-you very much. As you can see from my comment below, I only wish I had time to write more. The story is locked away in my head, finished, I just need to put keystroke to digital paper.
4085756 You're welcome, my good man.
4085756 Needs more likes.
There should be a group for good stories that severely need more likes from people. Fortunately for you, I will make such a thing.
I finally got a chance to actually read this.
It's pretty good so far. I can't wait to see how you develop Rain and Gale. Thinking back now, I believe the storyline had too many different "elements" playing for the reader's focus. I hope you have streamlined it since then, so that what characters you focus on are done justice.
Anyway, I hope to see this story continue. Cheers.
What's up with all the deleted comments?
4758366 That's actually a good question. I did not delete these comments. I have failed to check this page for quite some time (approximately 6 months). I think FIMFiction deletes comments automatically once they reach a certain age, if not, then perhaps my account has been hacked, either way, your guess is as good as mine.
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Are you still writing the story?
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Hey there! Sorry for the delayed response. I havent been on FiMFiction in sooo long. Looks like 4 years lol. I am still writing, but keep getting side-tracked, Im sorry for that. I am getting back into it now though, and hopefully more content will be updated soon. Im up to chapter 13.
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Good. The danger to good writers is stopping for long periods.
how long is the next chapter
Alright, seriously just put a cancelled tag on it instead of incomplete it's been 7 years now