After fighting for a torn, apocalyptic, world a Human is given a chance to experience peace. However he must fight for this peace and become stronger to defend the innocent. On this journey he will discover what he truly stands for, to fight for what is right. And learn wondrous mystical things such as magic and Angelic Martial Arts. He will learn, to be weak, strong and to love.............
this is good.
I feel I've seen this on here before. That beginning just reeks of deja vu to me. If it has, what's changed if anything?
3698822 I can assure you that I have never posted my work on this site before. I only just moved here recently but I am sorry for the confusion.
3698831 Was it on Fanfiction perchance?
3698832 Aye that's it. I went by Darksaviorshroudedindarkness.
3698836 Hmmm, that must be where I saw this. But I just can't shake this feeling I read this on Fimfiction before. I'm going through my Fav's and Read later lists just to make sure I'm not losing it.
10 of 5 mustaches
(I love it! )
3717592 I am glad you do my friend! ;D I hope that when you are done you will follow the sequel
Genuine chapter with a badass cliff hanger. Thank you for going out of your way to write this! /)^3^(\
This chapter was innocent and overall badass. I wish I could like this story more than once.
BEST. H-I-E FANFIC. EVER. no contest (other than "my little dashie)
3747790 So happy you think highly. If you want you can check out the sequel
3695298 ditto this entire chapter reminds me of this song
hmm not bad the story line is very interesting I shall continue to read this I like it
3823169 Thank you very much! and another I love Breaking Benjamin
oh god your good you have me on the edge of my seat i will continue to read this
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I couldn't find a meem for "stay tuned for the next.." so ya you get the point this story is really getting good
3717592
3746746 you can at least give it two thumbs up
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VERY,VERY intriguing however you do need to use some page breaks. it is extremely confusing to be reading how much Rainbow Dash must save this human then suddenly a flashback to the humans memory even if its a floating underscore it would help a lot. Thanks!
4239279 Sorry about that, this story was when I was still perfecting my writing skills. Thanks for the read!
This kind of reminds me of a videogame that I played. Are you sure that this isn't a crossover?
I think that I might know a guy who can get this animated and made into a video.
One of the best stories ever.......*claps hands*
i like dis. detail good
4709764 Sorry for the late reply but if that was in any way possible I would be honoured
4709600 maybe your referring to Prince of Persia: Two Thrones
lol
plez no spiders
what
dan dant daaaaaaaa
first
yes
no sex....................................................................that guy is good.....................................................1 base
no wings
sad
Thank you for writing this story I quite enjoyed it and I look forward to reading the sequel. Keep up the great work.
Twenty thousand hands,
Aint got nothing on Arceus and his million hands
1st base with an angel is no small feet
Badass
Ohh look out, badass over her
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OH well then...
what?
Long haired human sadge
Knights are cooler than samurais