Since the beginning, the four gods have ruled the world in various ways through manipulation, leadership and friendship. There are those who would fight back against the gods and those who are pawns. Pawns who would lead the world into its first world war. Twilight and her friends must try to avoid war and along the way find out the cold truth of why history has been building up to her own ascendance to royalty and beyond.
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The cover is wonderful!! It looks good!
3720901 Appreciate it!
A lot of people get pissed when you throw up an entire story onto their lap... Oh well, will read after I sleep...
3721390 I think that is the best part about this story. If you get through it all, you will know that there is more to it even after the final chapter.
3721901 This must of took you more than a week to make a whole story, spit it at the writers/moderation ponies, make it look awesome, and make it to me...
YOU SIR MUST HAVE MILLIONS OF MOUSTASHES
3723050 It took almost a year. I didn't want to submit chapter by chapter because personally, I got tired of a lot of dropped stories from authors. If people like the bit by bit, they can always take their time reading this but I just had to do it all together. Since this was intended to be a comic series, there is artwork of the characters. Did you manage to read the entire thing?
3723791 Oh HO HO HO! Your word count is 50,244 or so, I can do MUCH more than that. Like Caboose Blue is magic:343,908 word's
Malideus:74,226 words
House that Heart break rebuilt:138,426 words
Solitary locust:99,964 words
Mort takes a Holiday:137,539
In total:794 065 words Or so So... yeah...
I bet people think I don't have a life anymore huh?
3724062 The process of this things conception was very... stressful. I'm just happy that it's done even though I loved every part of it. 50k words is good for my first real try at a story.
I hope you like it! That's really all I can ask for, especially from a experienced author like yourself.
3724248 Heh he.... I don't really write... I actualy learn from others by reading what they do and don't! So no... I'm not that "experienced" as you say I am... I just like reading these stories!
But I DO recommend these stories that I have read to others. Some VERY comedic!
Holy moly! You posted 19 chapters and 50,000 words on one day! Honestly that's a huge turn off for readers. You could have just released a chapter each week or hell even every 3 days, that would have been able to attract an audience without scaring them with the HUGE word count
This does look like you worked really hard on it however I'm afraid you won't get the views or recognition you deserve....
3724280 I misunderstood. Thought you meant those were what you wrote lmao. Anyways, I believe you are the first person to finish this story. Glad you liked it! I'm sure it's been throwing people off though because of the bi-polar thumbs up/down ratio.
3724297 True. I had to do it though. Not only my extreme dislike for discontinued stories after investing so much, I wanted people to know that they are safe investing in mine. After all, it does continue past the final chapter. I hope you give it a shot past the first five chapters.
3724353 Wait... since when was there a 'dislike' ratio? I see nothing... WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!
3724385 I will put this on my read later list... I do hope it gets recognized because of the time you put into it
BTW: those dislikes are probably arrogant people just disliking due to the sheer volume
Cover art is awesome it sorta reminds me of Kirobero's Forgiveness Pending artwork with the mane 6 all around the OC
is this humanized i am some what confused
interesting
3820598 No. There is only one -humanoid- type creature in this story.
This story has an interesting idea with a lot of interesting world building. The largest issues I have are some grammatical errors throughout combined with a tale that feels very telly with large amounts of exposition thrown in. My favorite part of the story was the initial opening in italics. The part is visceral and sets up the story in an interesting way.
3878490 You are right. It's telly because at the time I was writing this, I had a dead line and it limited me in various places including grammar. I went over the entire story many times trying to refine it but I am sure I have missed some things. Over all I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I did!