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Good chapter. The secret pass was unexpected.... a bit.
Just found three errors. Else there's nothing to complain.
At the beginning Saphire cleared her thought. I think that should have been throat.
Another one was where you wrote solders and not soliders.
And finally A sentience was ended. That should have been a sentence I guess.
Hope to read more of this soon.
Dragon