Merry Hearths Warming Eve, Apple Bloom
Twas the night before Hearth’s Warming, and all through the house, not a creature was stirring, not even a-
“IT’S DONE!”
Ah, it appears one little filly was still wide awake, slaving in front of the oven as she pulled out a cake.
“Finally it’s done! And second to none!” Apple Bloom cried, with a smile perfectly wide. “Mah cake for Diamond Tiara, mah one and only. If only she were here, gay and hor-”
Let’s keep this PG, little filly. After all, no need to be so silly.
“Ah can hardly wait, for with this bait, her heart will be mine, her beauty so divine!”
Yes, it was true, no need to be blue. Little Apple Bloom was in love, her heart soared like a dove. She found the one that made her happy, the very one that was none too sappy. A wonderful filly, who was none too silly. She had glistening hair that made Apple Bloom dare to give it a touch, oh if she could do that much!
“Diamond Tiara, the apple of mah eye, please be mine, until we die!”
With a swish of her tail, and a nod of her head, Apple Bloom turned and thought of going to bed. Thoughts of Diamond ran through her mind, and though she didn’t act it, she was surely kind.
“Though her words are cold, and she acts so bold, ah have this feeling, of love never reeling!”
With thoughts of her day never ending, it made tomorrow all the more impending. This pie of hers was her last chance to win the heart of one as sharp as a lance.
As Apple Bloom thought of her one and only, there was another who felt oh so lonely.
“My heart, it aches, it pains me so. Why does tonight feel so slow?”
Diamond Tiara sat on her bed, her eyes burning red. Fresh tears could be seen upon her cheek, making her look awfully meek.
“My thoughts for her, I cannot stop. Not until I see her clop.”
She had fallen, this much she knew, for the very one, that made her stew. She who had a flank, that was more than simply blank.
“The image of her flank will not leave my head! Curse these nightmares, I wish them dead! Why does she haunt me in my sleep, I can’t even enjoy my flock of sheep.”
With a huff Diamond Tiara lay on her bed, her heart filled with dread. Tomorrow the families would dine both Apple and Rich, her longing for her love an unscratched itch. This day she would see her, the one that sent chills down her fur. The one that made her awake, and filled her heart with so much ache.
Apple Bloom, oh what a name! The mention of it sent her heart a flame! Her voice! Her Accent! Her adorable grin! This love alone felt like an incredible sin!
“My love! My Darling! What is this feeling?! Forevermore my heart needs healing!”
Jumping off her bed, and rushing out the door, Diamond quickly ran across the floor. She would not wait, not even for fate. She had only one place to go, and she could not go slow. To the apple farm she went, her love she wished to vent.
It was not long before she saw the farm, her hooves suffered little harm. She saw the kitchen lights on with a pony inside, no doubt the one she wanted to ride.
She burst through the door, and fell to the floor. Looking up in desperation, she smiled as she found her inspiration. The one she came to find, stood before her looking kind.
“Diamond Tiara, what in tarnation?!” Apple Bloom shouted with glee. “What are ya’ll doing within mah station?”
Her mouth agape and her eyes wide, she couldn’t believe what was to her side! Diamond Tiara, in all her glory, looked as if she was in a hurry.
“Oh, Apple Bloom, I could not wait! These feelings for you, I need to sate!”
Taking Apple Bloom’s hoof into her own, she blushed mad with a moan. Panting wildly as she stared into her eyes, her heart soared into the sky.
“Apple Bloom, how I love you so! Please, do not force me to go!” She proclaimed with tears in her eyes, and unwilling to say her goodbyes, “I need to see you, feel you, and tell you my feelings. I cannot contain these heartfelt dealings!
My love for you I give a hint! It is like a chocolate mint! It is sweet and fresh like the morning air, all the more reason to give you care! You may not be a gentle flower, but with my love you’ll never cower! Fore I shall always be by your side, even if you get a bit wide.”
As Diamond Tiara proclaimed her adoration, Apple Bloom’s love spread like a newborn nation. Never before had she heard such romantic words, it was as if it was sang by a thousand birds.
“Oh Diamond Tiara, ah’m so glad you came, for now ah can show you ah feel the same! Mah love fer you is like a fire, forever burning without tire. Though you mock and insult me without delay, it makes me feel awfully gay!
The way you move, it makes me groove! Ah want to dance, if ya’ll ever give me the chance! Ah want to be with you, forever us two! To hear yer voice, ah have no choice! Be mah special somepony, for anypony else would just be a big fat phony!”
The two fillies smiled at one another, and leaned close to kiss the other. Their lips met, and covered in sweat, they shared a sweet kiss, that nopony could miss.
Their love was in bloom and they held each other tight, unwilling to let go during that cold peaceful night.
Twas the Night before Hearths Warming and all through the night, two fillies gave their love and it was quite the scenic sight.
Merry Hearths Warming to all, and to all a good night.
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Ow my sides, they burn as intensely as a thousand tanned hides!
Your tale is fantastic, it left me riddled with laughter, I would gladly fistfight a raptor, just to see a sequel, for this has no equal.
There is but one error inside, I'm afraid that, from me, even in a story so epic, it cannot hide.
When writing an accent, it is imperative that an author remain consistent, lest to the allure of the like button, a reader becomes resistant
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...I made AB say...I'm and I...
I am literally pissed at myself for that, and that is something I must fix, thank you for pointing it out.
This was terrible. I love it.
I feel that this fiction was written by Zecora
Lol this was so cute. Good job with this fic.
3680464 No problem, its what readers are for.
)
(Dropping a LARGE hint to the people who don't care to help a story they liked even after they see something wrong
...........dr suess stylee, really
And don't tell me its not :shymad:
Dr suess?
Really?
And don't tell me its not
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I was actually going for the more traditional holiday childrens books, where they rhyme throughout it, but looking at it more closely, it does look like a poor imitation of Dr Suess.
3698557 This is an Over-saturation of the AABB rhyme scheme with only a few ABCB lines to be seen. To call it a poor Dr. Seuss imitation is an insult to Dr. Seuss
But still a cute story none the less
LOL
Yo, I thought of giving one of your other fictions a-reading. Just in case my assaults were misleading. So what does this story bring? My favorite shipping? My face after reading.
ok who put a thumbs down on my dr. Suess comment?
Lololol
That's what she said
Also, a fanfic By Dr. Seuss... or Zecora... Or Zeusscora?
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Me, because you see,
You did not rhyme, which was this books theme
And also, using flutterrage here is a premature act
This was not Dr. Seuss more than it was Christmas....
...
And that is a fact
This fandom seriously needs more DiamondBloom fanart. Mattricole needs more cover arts!
Nice story. The rhyme seemed forced at times, but I'm not one to complain, I can't rhyme for crap.
0.0....... ok WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST READ? I need to lay off the drugs.
5534224 this can just barely be considered clop
My favorite part, lol.
WTF was this i dont know but this story ruined my fan life
This story indeed I must say, has very well brightened my day. Your skill at rhyming has left my head bowed, truly even the wise Zecora would be be proud. The writing flows and ebbs like a river of words, melodically to the ear like the singing of birds. Writing rhymes and a country accent, I am pleased at how well that went. Though one line, to me, interrupted the flow, and constructive criticism I wish to show.
The double use of "apples" feels like a bit of a lump, let's see if I can give this sentence a little bump. Since you are the author I will give you your dues, and if you wish I have a few lines from which to choose.
OK as I let out a sigh, I know that is not my best try,
hhhmm maybe the plural is the source of my twitch, let's if I can give this sentence another stitch.
Close but not quite, I try with all my might. It seems to me wring in verse feels like a minor curse. To make words sting together in a chain is becoming quite the pain. I will wrack my brain to find a solution, I cannot relax without resolution.
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, hell, your review itself is better at rhyming than my entire story. I really like that second one, I think I''ll use that as a replacement, thanks 
!
Both of those are waaaay better than what I went with
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If it helps the way I picture to write in rhyme is to mentally envision a pendulum, swinging back and forth with each sentence following the tick of it. and making sure each rhyming word is on the return tick. example
[qoute] This story indeed I must say, "This" would be the start of the tick and "say" would be the end and
"has" will be beginning at were "say" left off and continue to "Day at the return end of the tick where "This" started.
Hope this helps, it was the way I wrote my review.
When Zecora writes fanfiction.
Its a really nice fic, so poetically)