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"WHAT THE BUCK ARE YOU DOING IN MY LIBRARY?!”

Yes, what is a pony doing reading in a public library. Totally unheard of... :ajbemused:

3678513 It's not so much as what he is doing, but who it is. Do you really think Twilight is the kind of pony to forget something like that?

Always writing good stories xD

3680144 I'm glad you think so. I think I've improved drastically from How The Hell, don't you?

"And hope that book isn't damaged or you will pay for it!"

For legal reasons she can be sued and he can't be charged for that book :) Stupid bitch

3680155 Who will the court believe? A princess or a no name who doesn't keep track of situation in Equestria? Claiming he assaulted her would be very easy.

3678513 He is in a public library, but long after closing hours. Ergo he is trespassing in her home.

3680161 With evidence she can still be charged and found guilty, princess of not.

3688443 If you think hitting him with a book is bad enough... just wait until you see what we have planned. Twi is going to take things way too far.

3688446 I fucking hate Twilight sometimes... (Sometimes, don't go fucking spastic because I said I hate her Sometimes)

3688449 Remember what she did to him and Luna in Lucky's Seven? This is worse. A lot worse.

She realises her mistake almost instantly however.

3688468 Well shit what's done is done.

3688449 I hate every character of the show from time to time (with the exception of Cadance. I can't recall a fic where I would dislike her). Also, there is no doubt she could be charged, convicted and punished when there is enough evidence. I was just trying to point out that a judge would evaluate the testimonies differently and that this stallion would be in disadvantage at the court. I am all for equal standing at the court for everyone, those with power shoudln't be imune to law.

3690584 100% agree with everything said there (except for the Cadence part, you should read Diaries of a Madman, then you will learn to hate almost every character in that story someway lol) but yes, no one/pony should get an advantage in court because of what they are, and how much money they have. Court should be about fair trials and what not. I see where you're coming from with the judge being slightly on the Princesses side, coss you know, she's a Princess and all lol:pinkiehappy:

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I dunno... Twilight does seem to be one of those ponies who turn the other cheek

3693435 Not when he was the worst of the bunch.

As with The Kindest Help, even though the idea is my editor's, it also draws some inspiration from Tears In The Snow. So you now have some idea of what's going to happen to him. Probably around the halfway point.

Fuck off Twilight! He's my Manticore now! I shall call him.... Gorey xD SIC EM GOREY!

Can you continue this?I encourage you 100%!Its turning out awesome { /)^3^(\ } Please continue ^.^

3778793 It is being continued, albeit at a slower pace. It will be here, soon I hope.

Geez... Twilight really needs to grow up and get over the past... ponies change and holding onto silly grudges like this is just not healthy for her. but for her friends and family too

3860753 She will do... only a couple more chapters before she pushes things way too far.

Author's Note:

Damn... see? You shouldn't have been a bully, should you?

Fuck off. I don't bully people, I make fun of my friends xD

3860763 Good, I want to see her fall.

Here have a comment: So far I'm liking this story, I'm also liking how little by little we are learning of our characters past. I look forward to more chapters :twilightsmile:

Twilight getting revenge? Coss she is a bitch (no offense to anyone who loves Twilight)

3908035 Glad to hear it. More history in the next chapter, as we discover your cutie mark and how you earned it.


3908623 How do you mean? The guards coming to arrest him. That wasn't Twilight's idea.:trollestia:

3909617 It could've been Twilight that tipped them off? Or told them to

I think it was one the stallions that try to attack twilight in the previous chapter. I am love this story.

3910433 As to who had him arrested?

Just have to wait... :trollestia:

I thought this story was going to be about Sky:pinkiesad2:, but a good story none the less. I'm looking forward to reading more in the near future.:heart::twilightsmile::eeyup::moustache:

3910506 Each of this series is going to involve each of the couples as they get together. The next OC has actually appeared in this one.

So we had SkyShy in The Kindest Help, hence why there appeared in this one.

3911250 cool. I look forward to seeing your later work.:yay::twistnerd:

3911250 Any estimate on when the next chapter will be out?

3944997 You know what? I'm going to work on it now. I'm 4K into a new fic, so I need a break.

3945003 Oh ok, Sorry if im rushing you, this story is too good.

Paranormal talent of talking to spirits. It's different, I like it. Should of guessed it considering Polter is in our name. :rainbowlaugh:

Good, but it seems that this took off a little fast, but thats normal for stories. Carry on good Sir/Madam. You have my support.... however much thats worth

I like it xD

Oooooooh Sombra!!! And of course you would put this in:

“O-o-of course, your majesty. Maybe… you’d care to join next time?”

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YES! More good literature

3994632 Well yeah, did you expect anything else?


3995301 It's coming, next one is where Armour comes to accept 'you'. Twilght's father does already, whilst Velvet is unsure.

3995360 No, No I did not :)

3995360 it will definitely be a very interesting chapter :pinkiehappy: it's a nice take on how someone or somepony can change from being your worst nightmare to being your guardian angel. It's a very uplifting fic so thank you :twilightsmile:

3996710 Thank you. If you haven't done so yet, check out The Kindest Help, sort of a prequel to this.

3996714 Prequel? :pinkiegasp: *tosses schoolwork across room* I must read this now

Well my friend I'm intrigued as ever

3997422 Good or bad intrigued?

3997429 the good way what other way and ps I love chrysie!
Oh and cant wait for the next chapter and yes I have kept myself updated on the story

I really like this fic, and look forward to what i will do in the future.

4033816 Whilst I can't say what you'll do, I think you'll be able to tell who you do!:trollestia:

4033863 i see what you did there :rainbowlaugh::trollestia::moustache::eeyup:

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