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i like it, i can't wait for more!!!:pinkiehappy:

Interesting. I don't usually go for second-person stories, but I'd like to see where this goes. :twilightblush:

Yay new story. Oh that reminds me how are doing buddy?

3164761 Thank you!

3164821:yay:

3165082 ...whoa, how did you get here? Not that I'm complaining, but I didn't think this was that good! Now all I need is DJ to turn up!! (You may have seen him lurking in the comments of some stories we have both read, mainly ceruverse ones.)

3165098 And I hope to keep it that way!!

3166084 I needed to come away from it for a bit. Been doing drill every evening this week because I've got two parades this weekend. I'm going to be using this as a 'distraction' from my other two on going stories. Having said that, I am slowly adding more stuff to the next chapter. Think you'll like what I've added now... do you need the link again or have you still got it?


Oh, and do any of you want to guess what the trial was for?

I sense inspiration from Tears in the Snow here :moustache:

Interesting

3166518 It'll come.

3166600:yay:

3166711 Tears In The Snow?
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Heh, there's normally a reference to them somewhere in my stories!!

3167730 Thank you.

Uhhh the pictures is lovely I think :unsuresweetie:

3169906 Hehe... believe me, I could've found a much different picture easily enough...

3169925 I think they don't allow some of the pictures here.

3170142 If tagged sex or NSFW, they allow them, as long as you state that the content is there.

But as you can see this one is tagged teen, so they won't be showing up anyway.

3170148. Exactly. But this one is tagged teen so.

nice pic xD

May I have another chapter good sir?

*grabs luna* back off shes mine :pinkiecrazy: also I am very interested in tbis but due to me not having evidence and liat of guesses pilling up I have no way to guess his crime

3226137 When I write it, yes.

3226768 You want my wife, you're gonna have to go through me. I stopped twenty humans almost single handedly (I was human at the time as well), with just Discord teleporting them away. I have seven years to hone my magical abilities and push my wings to their full potential.

Bring it bitch. (Also, if you want to have a guess, PM me.)

Heh... not that kind Luna. Those are reserved for you and me...

Fuck you, I'll do what I want in my dreams xD

3227143 naw I think I will wait and see what his crime is.

Bring it mortal, I have traveled back many a times and have defeated Sombra single handed eith nothing but the wings on my back and a combat knife. I mastered the art of dark magic. You cant beat me :pinkiecrazy: also why give up your human form thats no fun.

(Luna is best pony and I find it awesome I found another person who thinks so righttt?)

3227143>>3226768 Uh, how do you know that you two he aren't fighting a pointless battle, and that the Luna you like aren't instead two separate Lunas from two alternate universes...

3227800 So, do you think he actually did something? Sombra, eh?
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Gave up being human so I can be with the pony I love. What would you give up?
Also, yes,
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3227873 More than one Luna??

Hey Kenyis... I got an idea. Me, you... and a load of Lunas! What do you say?

3227935 You and Kenyis + Lots of Lunas = Lots of 'fun', I'm guessing...

3227948 DON'T SAY THA...

SIr, we have a situation! opens window What kind?

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Fun Fun Fun Fun Fun Fun Fun Fun

That kind, sir.

Well... shit. Captain, break out the tranquillizer guns... again. Thanks, Clear, now I got a busy weekend!

3227972 If you want Pinkie to get off your back, just tell her that Meadhbh's got the wood chipper again...

3228052>>3227972

This is interesting, ans sombra was just defeated by the crystal heart so he didnt stand a chance. If you actually fought him you would know how strong he actually is. And mutiple lunas *smiles* and I would give my human form to be with Luna and its just not needed. Equestria accepts me as a human, and bro hoof fpr luna being best /)

3229320 Hooray for Luna being awesome! (\

3229320 They accepted me like it as well, but I made my choice, and am happy with it.

Now excuse me whilst I try to stop Flame and Sky setting Canterlot Castle on fire... agian.

this is awesome, so have a like and fav:pinkiehappy::moustache:

3229576 Thank you, much appreciated. Hope to have the next chapter up by Sunday at the latest.

Hard to juggle three stories at once.:facehoof:

3229581 cant wait!:pinkiehappy: and dont stress yourself too much now you hear:ajsmug:

3229590 Heh, balancing this with my further training for my RAF engineering career and my small social life, plus gamig (hence why only one chapter has been posted in the paste week) is easyish.

Writing pones is cathartic, a nice way to relax. Also got beer. Beer helps me relax.

3229642 Ah yeah... Anyways, if you've got the time (and you want to), check out my other works.

I'd recommend staying well away from How the Hell Is This Possible? and Lucky's Seven, as they need to be heavily edited, and isn't as good as my others.

Um...:yay:
Onto the next chapter I say!
Alright! Okay!

Found this story today read it and it was pretty good cant wait for more

I sure as hay wouldn't want to mess with Rage-shift Alicorn Twilight. :twilightoops:

Hell hath no fury like a Princess scorn.

“Well, would you like to know why he's here? He was thrown out of Manehatten... FOR RAPE!”

DUN, DUN, DUUUUN!

I thought he raped a foal or something. Seeing as twilight was reluctant to let applebloom stay in his bed.

well remind me never to piss off twilight

cant wait for more

So many pissed off AliTwi's
In so many different places, oh my
Flutterrage woulda bin cool to see
But this as well is great with me.
As Twi lit up like the first of July
I must now extinguish my house, so bye
Until next chapter I will impatiently wait
So unless you feel REALLY lucky, don't be to late. (um... If that's okay with you, I could always leave you alone to):fluttershysad:
- Eclipse :moustache:

3238268 Who would? Unless you're a masochist... No Luna, just replying to some comments... ow!:raritydespair::raritycry:

Sorry... Mistress, it won't happen again. May I have another? Ow...:raritydespair::raritycry: sooo good.:raritystarry: (And that's how my Sunday mornings go...)

3238450 3239391 Could you imagine it if Flutters knew before hoof? Flutter rage or Twicorn rage? I'll take the angry princess any day of the week. (Heh... I do that anyway, just not always angry.:trollestia:)

3238942 But did he? No, he did not. Hell, he's never seen the mare prior to the trial.

3239283 No, that was in the back of her mind she was worried there was some basis to the claims, but Mac is a good judge of character, so that eased her concerns.

3239894 I don't think it was Twi's fault that your house is on fire...
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... and more will come, hopefully within the next few days.

very nice first chapter interested in the rest, very good.

shit twilight....

3241215 At least she's on your side, right?

3241303 true.... but still, Dayum!

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