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doctor whooves: something old and something new.

basically a story about how the doctor met derpy...from my head....probally really bad....but i hope you like it any ways.
(labeled teen just in case)

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steel soul

steel soul #1 · Jan 2nd, 2014 · · · something unexspected ·

Another Doctor/Derpy Story.
Pretty good start my friend. Keep it up.

Aura-Flare

Aura-Flare #2 · Jan 2nd, 2014 · · · something unexspected ·

I really need to work on my punctuation.....sorry.

twistedsteelpony

twistedsteelpony #3 · Jan 2nd, 2014 · · · something unexspected ·

You're doing quite well. You create scenes and the action moves at a good pace. There has t been allot of character interactions so no judgment there. Keep going... please. I want to read more.

Aura-Flare

Aura-Flare #4 · Jan 2nd, 2014 · · · something unexspected ·

ok,character interaction...defiantly in next chapter...wonse i decide whats going to be in the next chapter.
in also using a new computer so ive got to get used to the new keybord.. but thats still no excuse for bad punctuation ..i`ll work on that.