Twilight never became Celestia's student and Sunset Shimmer learned the power of friendship. Twilight is trained by her brother and then leaves Equestira for 7 years before coming back for her brothers wedding.
Hmm... just thought of something, a few chapters ago Twilights pmc company that she worked for was destroyed with only a few survivors. The ones that destroyed it knew where everything was, main compound, safehouses ect, what if Shining had something to do with that as well? The deaths of all of her friends in the company was a hard blow to her... If Shining did have something to do with that, I don't think there is a place on that planet that Shining could hide at that Twilight wouldn't find and get her revenge... Shining is so fucked either way, it don't really matter.
Peel his skin off with a vegetable peeler, pour salt all over him and then keep him in a tub of water that increases in acidity slowly. Keep him alive with shots of adrenaline. The water would soon turn into nothing but acid and watch as his body slowly melts away.
3786846 how about after everybody he holds dear turns on him for his crimes, he's killed by his wife while twilight laughs in the background. how she kills him i'll leave to everyone else, but to be killed by his wife would be the ultimate punishment.
Before Twilight kills Shining, will we learn why he did that to his sister? Hopefully, when Cadence learns what Shining did, she will side with Twilight (and divorce Shining).
Can we just.. go humane? Like, rotting in prison... while being tortured? Because we all know he's going to hell/Tarturas after his death.with the torture being done by Twily as well.
i mean, just simple things... Shave off his tail and mane... Cut off his dick... Rape him with said dick... JUST THE NORMAL STUFF. OOO or make him go through EXACTLY what he did to twi! Like, get a mass of gay stallion criminals, and let them have a go at Shining, than let him live his life with EVERYONE IN EQUESTRIA AND EVERYWHERE ELSE KNOWING WHAT HE DID SO THAT HE CANNOT RUN FROM HIS SINS. i think that's fairly fair right? i mean twilight didn't have to go through the second part ( the whole EVERYONE knowing thing ) but the first is pretty solid
do it. just some evil punishment. do it. please. if he lives in the next chapter i'm raging.
3788003 trust me my idea is going to be much better for now, picture everything you ever worked hard for taken away, your wife, your family, your career, your life. All get taken one by one and everyone you knew turns their back on you and when you have nothing there I am with a smile on my face watching with a smile as everything you ever had burn.
Those are just the minor things twilight will be doing and so much more.
You know, everyone is going on about killing armour in various nasty ways, it's actually nastier and more sadistic to make him live through things.
By live through it, I mean he doesn't end up dead for a long, long time. My preferred method is make his body run on magic, his own, bound into sustaining his body and being unavailable for spells. Add in to that, because his magic is constantly running, his horn will start burning out or become hyper sensitive. From there, make him watch Twilight's memories of what she lived through with the rape, possibly some of the other people he's hurt supplying memories as well, those being on a random timer to replay, with full senses illusions in place.
You can also change his blood's chemical composition just enough that it makes his body burn inside and alter his digestive tract so that while magic keeps him alive, he physically cannot eat or drink anything he can get his hands on, leaving him starving and thirsty. Eye and ear sensitivity can be re-arranged to make those painful to him and have his body rapid age to the point of being old or ancient, weakening but not destroying the organs, bones and muscles. Maybe give him a relatively harmless disease… harmless to healthy ponies that is, and make sure it's sterile so it doesn't spread or mutate.
I'm sure with enough initial magic in things, he could last a good few centuries…
Oh dear god Shining is so fucking dead. Can't wait to see Twilight rip Shinings still beating heart out of his chest, gonna be great.
3786352 lol I know right
Hmm... just thought of something, a few chapters ago Twilights pmc company that she worked for was destroyed with only a few survivors. The ones that destroyed it knew where everything was, main compound, safehouses ect, what if Shining had something to do with that as well? The deaths of all of her friends in the company was a hard blow to her... If Shining did have something to do with that, I don't think there is a place on that planet that Shining could hide at that Twilight wouldn't find and get her revenge... Shining is so fucked either way, it don't really matter.
3786426 no she has another traitor in her mitts for that. All of her planes will be shown through out the next few chaps
3786641 Ha! can't wait... still want to see Twilight rip Shinings heart out of his chest though... please make it happen I will be forever greatfull.
3786727 lol well you'll just have to wait for a few chaps, I plan to make him suffer
3786740 YAY!!
do not kill him. remove his tounge, then his eye's then his tail and let him wander in exile only able to hear the screams of the people who see him.
3786831 that's pretty dark I LOVE IT actually I'm taking advice on ways he should die
A way to kill Shining
Peel his skin off with a vegetable peeler, pour salt all over him and then keep him in a tub of water that increases in acidity slowly. Keep him alive with shots of adrenaline. The water would soon turn into nothing but acid and watch as his body slowly melts away.
3786936 wow that's awesome
3785185 oh gee how embarrasing. I shall start the PM emidietly tomorrow, because now im on le phone.
3786846 how about after everybody he holds dear turns on him for his crimes, he's killed by his wife while twilight laughs in the background. how she kills him i'll leave to everyone else, but to be killed by his wife would be the ultimate punishment.
Before Twilight kills Shining, will we learn why he did that to his sister?
Hopefully, when Cadence learns what Shining did, she will side with Twilight (and divorce Shining).
3787647 oh well yea
Can we just.. go humane? Like, rotting in prison... while being tortured? Because we all know he's going to hell/Tarturas after his death.with the torture being done by Twily as well.
i mean, just simple things... Shave off his tail and mane... Cut off his dick... Rape him with said dick... JUST THE NORMAL STUFF. OOO or make him go through EXACTLY what he did to twi! Like, get a mass of gay stallion criminals, and let them have a go at Shining, than let him live his life with EVERYONE IN EQUESTRIA AND EVERYWHERE ELSE KNOWING WHAT HE DID SO THAT HE CANNOT RUN FROM HIS SINS. i think that's fairly fair right? i mean twilight didn't have to go through the second part ( the whole EVERYONE knowing thing ) but the first is pretty solid
do it. just some evil punishment. do it. please. if he lives in the next chapter i'm raging.
3788003 trust me my idea is going to be much better for now, picture everything you ever worked hard for taken away, your wife, your family, your career, your life. All get taken one by one and everyone you knew turns their back on you and when you have nothing there I am with a smile on my face watching with a smile as everything you ever had burn.
Those are just the minor things twilight will be doing and so much more.
3788039
Holy shit, nothing can beat that.
you sadistic bastard... i like you
3788047 I try.
Awesome as usual!
3790317 thanks!
The cover-art of Twilight reminds me of Dragonball Z. Like a powered up Goku or Vegeta.
Either way the story is amazing, and I salute you soilder.
3827960 thank you kind sir/ma'am
3828121
Thats a ma'am
Armor is des not beg souprise, BUT *pumps hot gun and puts dual warhammers on back*OHOHOHO IT'S ON!!!!
Ded*
Shotgun* I CANNOT type lately for some reason
You know, everyone is going on about killing armour in various nasty ways, it's actually nastier and more sadistic to make him live through things.
By live through it, I mean he doesn't end up dead for a long, long time. My preferred method is make his body run on magic, his own, bound into sustaining his body and being unavailable for spells. Add in to that, because his magic is constantly running, his horn will start burning out or become hyper sensitive. From there, make him watch Twilight's memories of what she lived through with the rape, possibly some of the other people he's hurt supplying memories as well, those being on a random timer to replay, with full senses illusions in place.
You can also change his blood's chemical composition just enough that it makes his body burn inside and alter his digestive tract so that while magic keeps him alive, he physically cannot eat or drink anything he can get his hands on, leaving him starving and thirsty. Eye and ear sensitivity can be re-arranged to make those painful to him and have his body rapid age to the point of being old or ancient, weakening but not destroying the organs, bones and muscles. Maybe give him a relatively harmless disease… harmless to healthy ponies that is, and make sure it's sterile so it doesn't spread or mutate.
I'm sure with enough initial magic in things, he could last a good few centuries…
looking at the cover image..
Is flame Twilight like Super Saiyan?
I hope so.
3868178 yes
Will shining be tortured to death? If so, please let me handle it *licks lips mischieviously with a long sickly blue tounge*
THE FUCK!!! What kind of monster does that to their own sister! There is a special place in hell for people like that.
GRAAAAAAAAAAAAH SHINING ARMOUR IM COMING FOR YOU heheheheh HAHAHAHAHAHA
5753005
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
3847540 now this is something I would like see happen, but if out isn't in writing I have it burned into my head...
5085108
I concur with that.
it is after this chapter alone, that i start thinking shining may have been involved in the fall of her company entirely. inside info after all.