Twilight never became Celestia's student and Sunset Shimmer learned the power of friendship. Twilight is trained by her brother and then leaves Equestira for 7 years before coming back for her brothers wedding.
So, just wondering, does equestria girls exist in this? or are we just completely skipping over that and it just wont be there?
Also great chappy, i keep thinkin' somethin' is gonna happen with shiny, like him being a traitor, but it never DOES! i feel like... i need to retrain my gut feelings
Holy fuck her family is screwy. She hates her brother, she and her wife are dating the same guy, her adoptive brother is a guard captain with issues with her real brother, and she has a dragon.
3770507 meh I know if it was a real military plane we would never use that type of lingo to civilians.
But since she is a PMC military radio chatter is kinda engraved into her. Remember for almost 5 years she's been surrounded by military type personnel so it becomes second nature. Hell I use it around my own parents and friends when I'm on leave.
But anyway I know what your saying and I'll see about correcting it
Twilight smiled as she looked down at the wedding band on her finger rubbing it with a big smile on her face as she remembered the wedding and all her friends that came even had Chrysalis as her maid of honor and Krill was one of her bride's stallions along with Staff.
Another great chapter
3750746 thanks
I'm just hoping for the shit to hit the fan on the next chapter and see Overkill go Apex or something
3750819 we'll see
So, just wondering, does equestria girls exist in this? or are we just completely skipping over that and it just wont be there?
Also great chappy, i keep thinkin' somethin' is gonna happen with shiny, like him being a traitor, but it never DOES! i feel like... i need to retrain my gut feelings
3751325 oh you will see I'm actually writing the next chap now I think you'll like my version
3751452
*le gasp*
I think i will totally LOVE your version like i've totally LOVED the rest of your story!
honestly shining armor deserves worse.
I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!
Holy fuck her family is screwy. She hates her brother, she and her wife are dating the same guy, her adoptive brother is a guard captain with issues with her real brother, and she has a dragon.
3758770 epic ain't it?
3770507 meh I know if it was a real military plane we would never use that type of lingo to civilians.
But since she is a PMC military radio chatter is kinda engraved into her. Remember for almost 5 years she's been surrounded by military type personnel so it becomes second nature. Hell I use it around my own parents and friends when I'm on leave.
But anyway I know what your saying and I'll see about correcting it
3759255
Eeyup.
Cool