Twilight never became Celestia's student and Sunset Shimmer learned the power of friendship. Twilight is trained by her brother and then leaves Equestira for 7 years before coming back for her brothers wedding.
Oh my god finally. You sure do not know how to use google doc. It took me 3 hours to get the whole story. Okay, enough bit***** I will let you know when I a done. This make take a few days. I'm also going to have to edit A LOT of this.
3717278 nah, if your current guy/gal is already working on it, then i'll let them keep on with it. i i go and edit them as well, you'll wind up with two differently edited versions of the same story. but feel free to give me a ring if you ever need some help.
"I know and I'm the only unicorn in the world to be able to master the Stone Fist and Rolling Rock." She said as Dash's jaw dropped. "Whoa." She stated getting a confused look from AJ. "Not to burst your bubble AJ but the two styles I just said takes years of muscle building and punishing work. I mastered them in two years each while also mastering the Fine Blade and the grounded version of the Lightning Strike." She said as Dash feinted
interesting to say the least and I was hoping for twidash but I can settle for twijack
3695995 you don't really see many twijack out there so I wanted to contribute
3696078 very true twijack is limited to compared to twidash but in all honesty your contribution to twijack makes up for the lack twijack
3696161 Thanks
woohoo! one mare down, one to go! three cheers for the herd! well, hopefully.
Oh my god finally. You sure do not know how to use google doc. It took me 3 hours to get the whole story. Okay, enough bit***** I will let you know when I a done. This make take a few days. I'm also going to have to edit A LOT of this.
3697826 Well I had a Editor that's suppose to be going over it but if you want to take a look at it to Id can email it to you to help
3697022 hey you said to use google drive, and that was the first time I've ever used google docs.
3698849 Sorry if that sounded very rude. I was just trying to be humoris. Didn't work out the way I was hoping.
3699698 lol naw man it's cool I knew you were joking
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Some grammatical editing in the story wouldnt be soo bad either...
i'm curious, do you still need an editor?
3714051 sure I could use another
3715828 you already have some, and they still haven't gone over the previous chapters? or are they just focused on the newer ones?
3716886 don't know yet, said he was working on it, but if you want to give it a shot be my guest
3717278 nah, if your current guy/gal is already working on it, then i'll let them keep on with it. i i go and edit them as well, you'll wind up with two differently edited versions of the same story. but feel free to give me a ring if you ever need some help.
3717291 ok and I will
This isn't very obvious, I only understood when I saw the all clear thing after the fact.
Quite a skilled fighter.