What the fuck...

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I was going to read this...but now I suppose I can save my eyeballs the apparent amount of strain this story provides.

Don't lose your cool at CC mate, it just makes you look like a bit of a numpty

Bigger bed definitely needed, if not more

other then that, pretty good, just on the short side...which i dont mind

Funny ending, but a large number of grammar errors on both chapters, might wanna revise.

Funny ending, but a large number of grammar errors on both chapters, might wanna revise

it would be funny if he got the classic awkward morning boner in celestia's face

Funny ending, but a large number of grammar errors on both chapters, might wanna revise

Funny ending, but a large number of grammar errors on both chapters, might wanna revise

Funny ending, but a large number of grammar errors on both chapters, might wanna revise.

She Lutherans turned it back up

Is this a new thing, I've seen some other things about Lutherans but it doesn't seem to fit into this story.

Moar !

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I'm a Lutheran but all we do is like coffee. Am I missing something?

Look a second chapter... well the ride never ends
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So lets start with this review again... what you say?.

I was almost done when I noticed some eyes were watching me. I turned around to see all twelve of them look at me with hungry eyes. Which was kinda scary.

one movie sir:
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"Ok how much you want?" I asked them smashing up more eggs and cooking them.

do you have this problem sir:
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Some of them wanted grass on there eggs,so guess who had to go outside and pick grass at seven in the morning.

Well shit I thought they loved hay.. been proven wrong again.

(which is rare do to I live in the country.)

is that a question... I don't know if you live in the country... and im surprised there's a burger king out there

." Some people don't accept you here."

huh Tbh I would be scared to know that you harbor 12 magical beings

Luna looked like she was going to kill someone. She looked around to see Spitfire still had the controller. Luna used her magic and lifted my pillow and started beating her with it. Spitfire just laughed as the pillow hit her. Finally Spitfire gave her controller back and Luna stormed out the door. I looked at Spitfire. Then I gave a shrug and I left my room.

you witnessed attempted murder and you shrug if off!? well shit I have nothing to say
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I didn't know what the song was until I heard Lil Jon. They found my rap collection and they were playing Get Low. I ran upstairs to see Vinyl messing with my stereo system. I motioned for her to turn it down. She did and looked at me.

"Hey if ya wanted music just tell me." I said to her. She Lutherans turned it back up.

I'm not a total rap person but meh... and also She Lutheran? what is that? well this pic should describe that
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woops again wrong thing... well at least its Martin Luther... king

I went to my fridge and got out some hotdogs. I cooked them in the microwave and went back to the living room. I sat down next to Celestia again and began eating. Celestia looked at me and I gave her a confused look.

oh snap she wants the D:
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"Its that meat?" Celestia asked me.
"Yes yes it is." I said to her. I took another bite out of my hotdog.

well sunny Jim I'll show you how a hotdog is made:
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does that look like meat to you...?

Celestia asked me as a swallowed a mouth full of hotdog.

must of been like this:
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Pinki Pie

its Pinkie Pie...

I woke up. It was obviously night time due to the moon was out.

the moons comes out in the day too!
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just saying :P

Celestia was breathing pretty hard and her breath was hitting my mid section and lower.

is this going where I think its going...

I tried fighting myself from getting a boner,but things only got worse when Celestia dug her mussel into my pants.

well shit I was right! and also you can never fight the power of a boner! Never!

"Oh shit oh shit." I said quietly as her breath was now hitting my cock directly.

unintentional foreplay is best foreplay
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well thats the end of chapter two and still you have some misspelling issue and grammatical issues which I honestly have pointing out because its boring... but I'm having funreviewing this so yea onward

awesome read and funny to had me LOTF .