Scootaloo has always been a little bullied about her flightlessness, but recently it's gotten worse. Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon tease her relentlessly, and even though Sweetie Bell and Applebloom help, the bullies' insults cut deep.
One day, while in the pit of despair, Scootaloo is offered the solution to her problem: wings. But what will this shadowy gift cost her?
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This looks promising.
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I just hope when this is all over... Scootaloo will fly
Sorry for any inconstancies between this and season 4 ep 5. I havn't seen it yet, but I plan to soon!
Gaaah! I keep waiting for a new chapter but it never seems to come!
3661653 Heh, heh... Sorry! Been busy (Christmas, ya know). But hey! It's finally here, Chapter 2.
And then Scootaloo became Venom and vowed to kill Spider-Mare.
Looking good! Nightmare Scoots is on the rise!
Well, I know what story I'm stalking now. I really like this story and cant wait to see where you go with it. Great work!
In the Metal Gear solid series, Johnny Sasaki falls like this after you knock him out.
Good story so far, keep up the good work!
That does not bode well...for the ponies. It bodes well for me, because you updated. Keep up the good work.
I'm awfully late reading this, but excellent work so far. You really got the Spike and Twilight dynamic perfectly. Now, it has been a month and a half. UPDATE PLS?
Another great installment of a story with a lot of potential. And not a moment too soon! However great it is, there are a few issues. Mostly they are just typos, but if typos can get through that can mean crippling plot-holes are also possible. I would advise getting a few pre-readers or editors. I would be open to that if you want. Anywho, good job and can't wait to get to the next chapter!
UPDATE Please
If you edit it a bit it could be a great story
Nightmare Scooooooot!!!
3669758 PINKIE KICK wrong story that next door
SPOOOOOOOOOOON!
Nightmare scoot
Ni-Nightmare...SCOOT?!
Nightmare Scoot, really?
Nightmare, you couldn't have gone with Nightmare Whirlwind? Or Nightmare Rise?
quite an interesting start, I must say
oooh suspense I like it!
nightmare moon, is probably going take scootaloo's body, I don't know though, I ain't a physic
oh dear, I suppose I was right in the last chapter, me and my big mouth
dun dun dun! *plays the pipe organ*
What a twist, I freakin knew scootaloo, was going to taken over by nightmare moon, Now I want more of this story, but it is no rush, take you're time