Just your average teenage brony.
What happens when our favorite boy genius gets sucked into another dimension to find a world filled with cartoon-like ponies? What's more Opal has teamed up with Nightmare and is trying to take over Equestria. Can Artemis save this new world?
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good effort, but the writing style and concept don't quite work for me.
Holy chimycherrychanga I bucking love the Artemis fowl book series and your making a mlp version of it I hope it is as good as the books. Cant wait to read it and good luck finishing it
I remember this series! I haven't read it in so long!
Tracked. Can't wait for MOAR!
That's a no no.
That's a big no no.
No no.
I just finished reading it and plz hurry and make the.next chapter
Groovy idea, but not executed that well. I suppose the two universes might just be not very compatible.
As much as I love the Artemis Fowl books, I can't help but agree with 316151. The two universes really don't mix well together. It's a valiant attempt at writing a Artemis Fowl crossover, but I think it's just not going to work, as much as I'd like it to.
This wasn't the best executed story, but dammit all if you didn't try. Dammit all if I didn't feel your passion! Dammit all, I liked it! You captured Holly damned well, Artemis could use some more wit, and your mane 6 were on point. TRY HARDER FRIEND! I AWAIT YOUR NEXT UPDATE!
Excellent
316151 This will be explained in good time.
316151 This will be explained in good time.
i see how it turns out
Read it?
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This is good, but could be better. I would recommend doing a rewrite of this first chapter before moving on to the second. Keep up the great work!
I have read every book in the whole fucking series. 5 different times. It shall be amusing to examine the effects of Artemis on pony culture, with all his technological knowledge and scientific expertise.
317124
Very interesting idea, to say the least. My main concern is where is Butler
?! The next thing is what's is wrong with your quotes? They need to be in a new line every time you have a new person start talking. Last thing is that Artemis doesn't seem... right. I can't explain it seem to explain it right so oh well. Holly seems a little edgy, but that may be explained later. I hope you continue this because it has potential, but you need to have your heart
into it. Not much to say about the mane 6 right now, they weren't really in there that much.
TL;DR: Where's Butler? Incorrect quote use, and Holly seems edgy(may be part of the plot idk). Good elsewhere.
want more
Um, what happened here? I seem to remember being on chapter 7, then suddenly the page went 404 not found, and now there's only one chapter.