Friendship is born at the moment when one person says to another: "What! You too! I thought I was the only one."
The Cutie Mark Crusaders were doing their usual mishaps for their Cutie Marks When they bumped into Pixel Berry. Seeing her Cutie Mark, they asked how she got it in the first place.
Read my story to see how I got my Cutie Mark when I was in Ponyville High.
( this just popped into my head and just wanted to write it! So don't judge me of my ad enter of how it came to be)
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O.M.G! (O,my, gosh) this is, this is
...ok ok this is
fantastic!
I don't know why any one wold dislike this fic! By my experience there are far worse ones out there.
Do you know how hard it is to find a story with "original" traits
well I can tell you it can get hard to track sum. (without the cloping, twisted thoughts, stupid plots and the acasinal dum horror story)
but this fic is now on my favorites lis
. The story is sound, the character, loveable!
I look forward to your next story. I'm serious,(in a goofy way
) the next one you make I will read! And I never lie
p.s. I love the way the CMC reacts at the end.
3834989 Thanks for all of your sweet remarks on my first story
, and for also favoring my story as well. I'm actually thinking on making either a human going to Equestria or me turning into my OC (and somepony did a story with me in it. its called Suddenly Starlet if you want to read it
) but you can decide which one I should start on first if you want (Both are great but I can't decide which to start first 
)
Prhaps a flip of a coin can help.
but what is an "o.c"? if I may ask.
3855186 Alright! (OC means Online Character, your own pony Character)
Aaaaaaaa! Now I get it! Thank you
I have a pony for that. But I'm still working on him...I'm just barely getting the basics on how to draw him
3855875 Ok (And if you were curious, I made my OC on the Pony Creator V3
)
You look good
Is she supost to look like in alicorn, or was it intentional? If that is so then why didn't the cmc notice it?
please pixel., tell me
3856128 Actually in my story, I'm a Unicorn
. But after awhile of being Princess Twilight's Test Subject, I became a Alicorn like Magic (Literally) 
and yes; she's supposed to be an Alicorn
So...you got to meet twilight on a first name basis?...already?!
that must mean that you are vary important... O.M.G!
I'm talking to a celebrity?!
dumbstruck
3856218 *Giggle*
Yeah, but I was friends with her before the whole Alicorn incident. and afterwards I volunteered to be her test subject if she wanted to try new spells when spike wasn't around or it worked on ponies only. (I asked for the job cause being a internet celebrity doesn't get you far 
)
Lucky
yay!
3855046
You get yourself into a ton of stories, huh?
3937417 Pretty much
(Things just pop in my head & I just NEED to type it before it goes)
The thing that stuck out to me the most is you used 'hear' where you should have used 'here' a lot. There are various plot holes I noticed. Well, maybe not always holes, but messed up logic. I understand that these are just natural mistakes, but if you ever revise it, its worth looking over. Most of my other irks about the story have to deal with some of the plot elements themselves, but thats just preference. Nonetheless, it was a good read. It earns my favorite.