Years back, far to many to count Discord was not always... Discord. No, he was a regular goat with a family and a love for pranks. He rants out his story for all to hear, just hoping to be understood, and maybe, just maybe he will have more friends.
"To become who you are meant to be. You must first accept your flaws, then make them into your strengths; only then, can you fully be who you are meant to be"
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Discord?
likes and faves all around! Well done!
Hmmm... Interesting premise, plus I'm always a sucker for a good origin story.
I found a couple mistakes, but nothing that majorly took away from the read. It was well done, if a bit rushed.
All right. You asked for it.
There should be a semicolon after "all his fault" instead of a comma.
"For" after "land of Equestria,"
A period after "on from there" and a comma after "yes"
"They, like me, could..."
Semicolon after "the Idea" and "mistake" would probably work better there than "flaw"
"a crossed" should be across
And I think that you should be a little more descriptive about the machine, apparatus, whatever it is.
Otherwise it's interesting! I never thought of Discord as previously being a goat before.
Where are you planning on going with this?
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Rushed for a reason as of now, but since it had a successful pilot turn out, I will write more slow and detailed to what is going on.
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Thanks, the changes have been made.
Where I plan to go with this? Well when It was first written I had now Idea.... I was tired and just wanted to write, then it turned into this.... Kinda like what I did with Indigo's Secret which in the middle of a rewrite. I already have half the second chapter, written and will work on it a bit every night up to the 4th chapter. There I will continue on other stories I am working on. I do need a pre-reader/ editor. If you are willing, could you help out with that?
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I would love to! I'm not able to get on every day, though. Well, not a PC anyway. I can use my dad's old Droid, but it's really hard to type on it. My comment was actually typed from the Droid and would have been more detailed if I didn't get sick of doing it. But I know that I can get on a PC at least once-and often twice-a week, so if that works, then sure!
By the way, the title was one of the biggest reasons that I read this. I mean, really, it sounds great! But try to say it ten times fast!
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Well I will be sure to contact you when Chapter two is done. It is about 45% there, from what I have planed.
3608451 Okey-dokey!
Sombodys disliked discord.... That's disappointing