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AceInsane


Uh, heyoo. Look, I'm gonna make this short and simple, kapiche? I'm not the best at pony stories, so sorry if I suck. Cuzzzz I probably will. Eeyup. Peace-a-late, brohas.

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Pinkie Pie just wanted a little something sweet for a snack...or maybe a lot of something sweet. She ends up eating an entire box of popsicles! now she's sick and has the worst brain freeze, but doesn't know what to do about it, and Mrs. Cake won't let her out of the shop until she feels better. What will our poor stuffed mare do?

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Haha, good job! It's funny, and I think it shows Pinkie and Mrs. Cake's personalities well.

Nice but a tad bit short. The part with Twilight at the end sounds like it could leave room for a sequel, if you ever wanted to do it. :eeyup:

All the same I love these type of fics, The Cakes are esentially Pinkie Pie's adopted family and they love her dearly. Fics of them being parental like figures to her always warm my heart. :heart:

Hey jack that story just rolled of the tongue. It was commendable. Totally nailed he pinkie character.

3604735 I was thinking about it, this was really just a spur of the moment idea, excuse my pun. :derpytongue2:

This is cute. You got Pinkie's random behavior good. (At least I think it was anyway.) Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

3607642 oh my goodness, so honored you read my story :heart: thank you very much, I'm debating on writing a sequel to this, but I'm not sure. Than you though :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Wow didn't expect that reaction. :twilightblush: I'm honored that you feel honored by me. (If that made sense.) Just have fun writing.

3608497 it did make sense indeed. and thank you, I will :rainbowkiss:

Ooook...then....ummm....this needs to be re edited, very bad and though they seemed true to who they are, it's not realistic, at least not to me. Pinkie is a grown ass mare, she does not to be treated like a child, even more so by her bosses, she should have gotten fired for doing something so bucking.....you know what? Your story, your rules:facehoof: Moving on.

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