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Applejack's tenth birthday started out badly. She got in trouble with her mother and father, but at school, the cutest colt in fourth grade suddenly had an interest in her. Will it turn out to be the best birthday ever, or take a turn for the worst? Will the last words Applejack shares with her parents be ugly ones? One mistake could change Applejack's simple life forever.

Sometimes things happen for a reason.

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Comments ( 5 )

This story very well depicts what I thought happened to Applejack's parents.

Very well done in my opinion.

I hope Thalia got killed or something more horrible.:ajsmug:

This story is quite good...
But the sudden change of pacing near the end is weird.

3583238 I apologize for that, I have a bad habit of becoming lazy near the end of a story and suddenly speeding up at the end. I really need to work on that. :fluttershyouch:

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