It's winter time in Equestria once again, and this time Princess Twilight and her friends are supposed to be simply going to the Hearthswarming Eve as guests; However, between Applebloom's sudden tantrums, Rainbow Dash's surprising desires, and Pinkie Pie's ultimate discovery, many things are sure to happen this season that they'll never forget.
This particular story revolves around Fluttershy's adventure on her way to Canterlot. She's stuck right in the middle of Applebloom and Applejack's quarrel and this may come with rather serious consequences.
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Chapters (2)
DAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMNNNNN!
What a way to start a story. Bravo.
Well, your writing skills aren't terrible. Just keep on practicing. It's like going to the gym. Sooner or later, with enough work, you are gonna get muscles.
I'll be keeping an eye on this. I will also give you an upvote.
3580073 Thanks for the vote of confidence
3580024 Thanks! Hopefully the part 2 will not disappoint.
Yay! I'm glad to see that everypony made it out alright, more importantly that Applejack and Applebloom are okay.
3594128 I'm glad you liked it
Thanks for the fave btw and everyone loves a good ending 
Dun dun dunnnn. Conflict strikes. Ponys have hands.
I had fun reading pinkie's -
Dun dun dunnnnn.
Fun times.
Dun du-
Dang it, sound effect system is broken.
3594714
thanks for the heads up, I didn't even notice it! 
Ahh, that song.
My sleep.
I'm not getting any.
Hehehe.
But now for things that caught my eye.
"Our natural ponfied words are missing from 'people and everyone' up to you"
What ? Things they never had before. But they had it before they did?
I got confused there.
Anddd
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Well good stuff here tho, 4/5
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Wow, I even double checked this. That discerning eye is really something! Thanks for the fav btw, I'm glad you enjoyed it! 
I am glad to see that you have used a worst case scenario that I could mentally and emotionally relate to as it reminds me everyday that I will struggle with something throughout the day.
the first thing I would do in this case physically is find shelter, then I would begin working on a fire, thirdly, food, food is essential for survival, water is also a must I would consume snow if it helped at all hell I would drink my own urine if I had no other choice
3607067 I'm glad you found such a connection with the work! I wanted to portray hope and resilience through Fluttershy's actions, because I do sympathize with that kind of thinking. I find myself working on hope and determination alone when life gets really stressful