So, I guess you were expecting another chapter in the thrilling adventure of Blue Rune, well guess what and not it's not Braeburn or the potion, but it is really good. So if you have some form of Central nervous system they you would of guessed it, it's a sequel, so click out and watch the story continue to unfold.
A new beginning
-DBK
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Yes I know there are gramatical problems that I need to fix.
MORE! I NEED MORE!
Loved the story. The beginning is a bit rough and seems to be rushed (so is the ending), but after a while it gets really enjoyable. The ending is really heartwarming and optimistic, I see the change in overall story mood a bit drastic, nevertheless liked it very much. Thanks for this great piece of work Bunnana King!
Well, I read it. The work is quite fine, but i didn't like the plot. I will not explain why, as it is really hard to put into words. Very probably, I didn't understand idea behind it.
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Try your best to tell me why then, I'm quite courious to know why the story wasn't to your liking.
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Still at Chapter Five. Shame, now hurry up and get to reading.
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Indeed
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Good. Now read the rest.
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1337 talk. Decode it to see what I was saying
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Ебать с этим от случайных дерьма.
Translation: To fuck with that of random crap
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FUCK THIS STORIY AND FUCK THE PER AND FUCK YOU
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gr8 b8 m8
3437436 fuck you to
firstly learn to take criticism when your publishing a story on lint for the WHOLE FUCKING WORLD TO SEE and I bet ya a thousand bucks your mum has looked at you more than a few times and asked herself "what the fuck was I thinking"??? what a sooky lala , seriously.
3437880 pathetic - your a sad fucka
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the picture is too large so it gets cut off FAIL and yeah yeah yeah im a bitch so original .....but you'll always be a sad lame crap storyteller. bye bye im leaving this page now so any response won't get read............knob.
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Y-you too...