The Cutie Mark Crusaders, convinced their long sought cutie marks are for exploration, plan a daring trek through the Everfree Forest.
They don't find their cutie marks out there, but what they do find is much more interesting.
And much, much more malicious.
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Hoh, boy... If it tries the same tactic, I wonder what Luna will think, and whether anypony will think she's to blame...
Cutie mark crusaders: Mask thieves!
More line spacing please!
Otherwise, pretty interesting and well written, I'll come back later when you release more chapters
Well, when I saw this in the popular stories listing (grats on that by the way), my first response was basically this:
Still, color me intrigued.
-- And agreed, be sure you add an extra line between each new paragraph or exchange of dialogue.
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That's the same reaction I had when I saw my story in the popular listing
And yet, in this world, an alicorn controls the moon.
This could make for an interesting power struggle if thought out properly, but I should think the mask would be rather out of its element, being from an entirely different universe with very different bounds of magic.
Umm...OK, so what happen next? Is there going to be another chapters to this story or is this going to be just another dead crossover fanfic, like so many others? Because it's already been over a whole year now.