• Member Since 24th Feb, 2012
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Mariorulez14


I'm a gamer, a brony, and a music fan.

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(You can also read it, properly aligned, on Google Docs: https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B3r6_GpJw0ndTHk4bnUwVlBhQmM)

There's a realm of thought that we commonly call "imagination", where just about anything can happen...including talking ponies! What happens when the barrier between reality and imagination is tested to its very limits?

This is the first time I've seriously attempted at a story. Feel free to point out any mistakes I've made, as well as giving constructive criticism (It takes a lot to hurt my feelings, so fire away ;P).

Hope you enjoy reading Overactive!

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

Cake-batter grenades?
Pinkie's a walking weapon dump, isn't she?

This is best. Love the concept of the whole thing.

In the making of this chapter, I discovered that Rarity's hard to write for...at least for me personally.
I still think it's well-done regardless. Expect Chapter 3 soon.

This one's shorter than the other chapters and it's more slice-of-life than plot development, but hey...that was the plan. I promised I'd get it out before I left and here it is :pinkiehappy:
Enjoy, readers!

Hand-written on the way to, during, and the way back from my Oklahoma trip...I bring you Chapter 4 of Overactive. Twilight's here everypony, huzzah! :rainbowlaugh:

Chapter 5 will be a longer chapter, I promise.

That last line is full of win

i like it allot but are they able to still use their magic and stuff?

Where do you live and when can I come over?

Use your imagination meme here

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