Twilight's Library/House
"I CAN'T BELIEVE THE PRINCESSES PUT YOU MY CHARGE!!!" exclaimed Twilight as she hopped around me.
"Shocker." I dully replied.
Flashback a few hours before
"Wait, what did you just say?" I questioned Celestia.
"I said you will be taking residents in Ponyville with Twilight"Celestia answered.
"REALLY PRINCESS!?!?!" said Twilight acting a happy schoolgirl.
"Don't I get a say in this." I objected.
"Given the current situation that you are in, do you think it would be wise in considering second thoughts." Luna said.
"I guess not." I answered.
"Then it's settled, we will inform the Mayor of Ponyville about your arrival soon after you get acquainted with Twilight. I officially welcome you to Equestria Torrent James Braddock." Celestia said.
"I appreciate the formality Princess Celestia, but "Torrent" will be just fine."
"As you wish."
With that Celestia lit up her horn, and then within a bright flash of light we were in what seems to be Twilight's house.
Present
Luna did bring up a valid point, with me being this new world I never really thought of where I was going to stay. I gotta say, it was very generous of the Princesses giving me a place to stay. But Twilight seems to be enjoying this even more than I am.
"Excuse me." I said snapping Twilight out of her happiness.
"Oh, right..." she said with slight blush of embarrassment. "Shall I start with some questions about you?" she asked.
"Some question & answers huh? Alright fire away."
With that, her horn glowed, levitating a quill and scroll in front of her, she then signaled me to sit down on a stool, which I did.
She then started asking.
"What is your full name?"
"Torrent James Braddock."
"When's your birthday?"
"July 5th."
"Do you have any hobbies?"
"I have a lot of hobbies."
"Name a few."
"Building and making Blueprints."
"Can you tell me more about you kind?"
"Geez where to even begin... well, humans or Homo-sapiens for a scientific term are related to the primate family, but that began to change when the humans began to evolve. During the prehistoric time's humans during that era were called cave people, they had to use their brains to scavenge any resources that they can get their hands on, they then use the resources to build weapons for hunting then they invented fire. I wasn't so long when the human brain began to develop even further, then humans then left the old lives of living cave then soon began to make small huts and tents, which soon let to making villages. Villages became small communities and small communities became town... bigger if the not same size as yours. And on a side note: as the brain began to evolve, so did technology, humans began to build cars, airplanes, we even made advance medicine that practically cure any types of disease. And even considering of all we've accomplished all those years ego some humans tend to be stubborn and want to increase the technological prowess to lord knows where and so on and so forth.”
“Wow...” is all Twilight could say.
“You can say that again, but unfortunately humans take it for granted."
"What do you mean?"
"With technology advancing, it will make people think even the most smallest of task could be a chore."
"So it can be a good or bad thing?"
"It all depends on how the user uses it, technology aside do you have anymore questions for me."
"I have one more..."
"What is it?"
"Tell me about your family."
I got an uneasy feeling within the pit of my gut by that question, Twilight soon then realized it.
"I-I apologize I didn't know that would be a very personal."
I took a deep breath, "Don't apologize it's not your fault."
Twilight looked at me with concern.
I then smiled. "Hey, hey there's not need to be depress."
Twilight's ears perked up then she smiled, "Your right, hey I got an idea how about I give a tour of Ponyville?"
"I don't see why not? Sure I'm game."
"Great! Let's go!!" Twilight exclaimed as she went out the door.
i soon then followed after her. 'I think she's a little to excited.'
More pleaze >U<
awesome story keep it up!!!!
I will edit for you if you need, and GOD created humans they didn't come from monkeys and if you think they did then why aren't they evolving today or older from being in captivity for hundreds of years?
3731104 I was referring towards the BC period. (before Christ)
3731104
"GOD created humans. They didn't come from monkeys."
Actually you are right. Humans didn't evolve from monkeys, they have an ancestor in common.
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Also, evolution doesn't happen from day to night. It takes hundreds of thousands of years for some aspects to change and there are a lot of factors to be considered.
By the way, even though I said these words, I am a christian.
3735525 I'm just going off of what I learned, but if you are wanting me to edit the chapter, please, don't hesitate to give me more information.
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Well, that is quite an honor, helping the writer of a story that is so awefull (not to be mistaken with awful).
You can edit it so that he says to Twilight that his species is the only one of the "Homo" gender that is not extinct, maybe. I do not want to bother you, so do what you think is better.
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Awefull because awesome is not aweish enough.
(This comment only exists because I didn't want to be misunderstood).
3735650 For any future chapters or stories that I post will you help me?
If you don't mind, I would be very happy to do so.
3735878 Thank you friend.
3736282
You are welcome.
nice
3731104 Hahahahaha! Ahh heh That just made my day. Surprising how hope can make people stubborn.
3732305 ahhheem god existed before time Jesus was born a lot later
3735525 well why haven't they in the past hundreds of thousands of years?
3735631 I can edit if you need man I'm SOOOOOOO booooooorrrreeeeddddd
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Who said they haven't?
Fossils are a proof of it.
And I do not want to accuse or anything but it sounds like you are trying to shove the fixism theory down everyone's throats. Jesus once told his followers to spread Christianism across the planet, not to impose their beliefs towards other people. One of the most important things he taught was to respect others's opinions. Again, I do not want to accuse you of anything.
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Yes, according to the bible, God existed before time. But what is your point?
3784925 he said it was bc before Christ but god was around before then before time that's my point.
3784910 no I'm not trying to shove it down your throughts but you need to know that scientist created the Big Bang and vertical evolution theories because they don't wanna accept that god created EVERYTHING!!!!!!
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Actually, those theories, apart from not being totally accurate, were created because there was a lot of research and studies so that they could be born. This is not some theory that makes no sense whatsoever, like the idea that aliens kidnapped dinosaurs. And Darwin was proven to be right by latter scientists who saw his writings.
And scientists do not want to accept God?
I disagree. There exist a lot of Christian scientists who contribute to the science world with their intelligence by making huge discoveries but remain attached to their beliefs and ideals. They can conciliate both science and christianism.
3731104
Son, you went full retard.
Never go full retard.
I'm a Christian proponent of evolution and I gladly spread the word of God and science. It takes a lot of stupid to believe they are mutually exclusive.
3785011
I am now pretty confident that you are trolling.
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Excuse me, but what do you mean by "Christian proponent of evolution"?
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I'm a Christian and I push for evolution to be taught in schools and churches.
There is no 'science vs religion' there is only truth and people trying to the best of their abilities to unravel it.
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I agree with you! Thank you for the explanation.
a good chapter
3814772 I AM NOT FUCKING TROLLING!!!!!
3786190 yes I agree there were a lot of christian scientists, but many of them now refuse Christ!
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Very unlikely, why would they do that?
3916334 Because they don't! I'm sure they have some lame excuse but they don't accept anymore
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You: ...many of them now refuse Christ.
Me: Unlikely, why?
You: Because they don't.
Now what the heck was that kind of answer? And you can't accurately say that they don't anymore.
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Okay, I guess I will just have to come to terms with that fact that there are people still out there that are really this stupid.
3916373 I'm confused I took a 50 problem math test it's 12 at night IM TIRED
3916949 Are you insulting me or seldom scientists I can't tell I'm tired and drunk.
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Then take a breath before writing anything if you are not in a normal state, it helps a lot. And what are "seldom scientists"?
3939879 seldom = some, very few.
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Don't blame me for that. English was not my first language to be learned, so there are a few words I have to learn yet.
3944419 I'm not, it's fine.