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When possible, it sure is nice to see a couple ponies be murdered by Tumblr (literally and metaphorically) and write down the inspiration from it.
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I knew this was gonna *uckin happen someday!
I *UCKIN KNEW IT!
Like for you!
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Darn, missed my chance. Oh well, I'll read it!
A word seems to be missing at the end here.
"Each other" is two words.
One space too many between "casting" and "together."
I have seen both versions of Wilfred and I have always thought that he was a Pooka like Harvey, which would explain everything. In answer to your question, yes, you should continue. I would enjoy reading more of this. I will favorite and upvote. As Winston Churchill said, "KBO."
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"Exhaling sharply, she opened the door, permitting the butterscotch mare." No, that was intentional and (to my knowledge) is grammatically correct.
Thank you for the other corrections though, and for the favourite!
3553182 Alright, I was just wondering what she was permitting the butterscotch mare to do.
Please continue!
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Okie-dokie-loki!
I am not sure if this is an Australian dialect, if not, "make" should be "take."
You may want to make this "chest" or add an anthro or human tag. Because a pony's "breasts" are near their crotch.
Twilight Sparkle is the best Ryan Newman... or Adam Douglas?
You seem to be switching back and forth between the Australian version of Wilfred and the American version. Is that on purpose? Or am I imagining things? Like a big, hairy man in a dog suit talking to me. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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Well, no, a 'breast' isn't referring to the teats of an animal. A breast is the chest, it just so happens that a human's 'teats' (
) is around the breast area.
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Well... yes and no. While trying to recreate Wilfred as best I can in the MLP scenario, I would still like to add a bit of originality to the character. (Otherwise I would just be copying what happened in the episode and putting it into text. (and for the record, I actually haven't seen the Australian version.)
3639565 Well, thank you for keeping me abreast of the situation.
I have no idea why I typed that.
I have never seen "Wilfred", but this looks pretty entertaining. Discord would be proud of the not-dog. Upvote from me.
Hahaha, yes! A Wilfred story! One question, though. Is this based on the Australian show, or the us remake with Elijah Wood?
3846410 Both, the one with Mr.Frodo, and neither. (if that makes sense.) I've only seen the US one, but I've also tried to keep things original enough that it won't just seem like the script of the show.
Looking forward to reading, but please list somewhere that this idea is not your own. People might get the wrong idea... Wilfred's not quite well known enough for, like, everyone to know about it.
Very awesome. Enough originality to make it its own thing but it still feels like the show, haha.
Jeez I loved the show and this made my day pretty good
I hope you continue.
4876257 ;-;