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Ayaline


I'll gladly proofread/edit anything non-judgmentally if you need help. Just send me a message and I'll do my best! :3

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I sense another good clopfic coming in the future.

I enjoyed them both while the original was a tad more erotic in a sense, this version was still pretty good.

3514527 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed both of them, I put the edited version up because some people's fetishes just aren't another's cup of tea. :twilightsheepish:

3514636 yeah, I really love the triggers, I don't care if the trigger is futa, pee or any trigger of the sort I just find it so damned erotic.

I think the whole bladder/pee thing was incredibly hot tbh... I thought it was going whole other direction for a moment and got excited ~_~ but I guess not many people are into that :$ ahah. But overall super sexy mmm.

Not bad.... But there was one issue. All you've got to do is replace that pesky "magical barrier" with "twilight's mouth" and you're golden if you know what I mean:unsuresweetie:

3520058 another enthusiast I see, try these on for size

3528800 Ah, I purposely did it for a reason. xD I'm not into the fetish that far, I should say. Physically touching (or drinking) is where I have to draw a big, bold line that says "NOPENOPENOPENOPE" :twilightsheepish: But I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :3

3520058 I'm sorry if I misled you! I think I have a general idea of what direction you thought it was headed in though. :twilightsmile:

3530133 Oh no it was still super incredibly sexy ;) believe me :3 lol Thank you very very much <3 I can't wait to see what other student/teacher goodness you have in store!!! OuO

3578435 I hope I can begin planning another story very soon! I don't want it to be another year before I update. :twilightsheepish: And thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :heart:

I really enjoyed this clopfic. A short story with well written characters and I'm very glad that poor Celestia finally gets the relief that she needed. :twilightsmile:

Finally a clopfic that's actually worth reading without the crappy memes of the Princess nor any extreme fetishes. :pinkiecrazy:

The Chapter For Those Who Don't Want the Triggers to Spoil Their Mood

AH HAHAHAHAHA let the triggers spoil their mood

i was hoping when i first saw this that there would be some watersport lol

“Dear sister, art thou okay?”

Flowery English paired with "okay". That's sort of jarring. I'd suggest looking into synonyms.

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