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Battle Damage


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1,000 years. A mighty long time for Equestria to be without its most valuable source of protection: namely, the Elements of Harmony. Leads one to wonder how Equestria could have survived for so long, with no real way to protect itself from darkness or hatred and the like. Cerainly Celestia could not have single-hoofedly protected a land with her magic alone. And she didn't.

Equinox. An underground organization of infiltrators, assassins and the like, dedicated to keeping Equestria from plunging into chaos. This story does not seek to explain the origins of Equinox. It simply seeks to relate a rather complex time in it's- and Equestria's- history.

A collab betweenAles Flamas, writing for Deadeye Sureshot, and

Maneiac(writing for Sugarcane)

and BattleDamage (writing for Mini-Kat)

Jaeger Donutt for Fake Out

A special thanks to everyone who let us use their OCs for this story. Not all of them will appear right away, but all of them (that were accepted) will make an appearace at some point, and some may even play crucial roles in the plot. So keep an eye out for yours!

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 7 )

I really wish we could've had some way to submit these ourselves. I've caught many errors in my chapter that I wish i could fix. :applejackunsure:

Comment posted by Battle Damage deleted Dec 2nd, 2013

I like the premise. It's pretty interesting.:twilightsmile:
My only gripe is the grammar, but I digress.

3579929 I completely agree about the grammar. I had written my chapter in the third person first... and then Ales said that he wanted the prologues to be in first person... after I finished.

3583743

You have done well. I myself have used "Mine" rather than "This one" but I'm absolutely loving your use of her.

What if the full house was 2 kings of clubs and 3 aces of spades For both of them?

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